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| Reviewed by Aamie Burnley |
3/2/2003 |
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| ... lovely; a very evocative and intelligent write. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
3/2/2003 |
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Excellent writing.
Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/2/2003 |
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"Other memories
are brightly colored nylon,
filled with helium, rising
high and out of reach."
Wonderful choice of words. Flows beautifully.
~E
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
2/14/2003 |
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tweaked into a "poem" that
slides into fits of discontented,
blue, moody eloquence.
Excellent
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/20/2002 |
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| i really like the iamges you have created and the flow and syntax of your thoughts... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/20/2002 |
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| I like being pinched by punctuation. |
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| Reviewed by Sandi Braveheart |
10/20/2002 |
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Well done -
"pinched into inadequate words" -
I like this - good imagery |
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| Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) |
10/20/2002 |
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| Great imagery. Excellent writing. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
10/20/2002 |
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| Excellent.. |
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