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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
4/13/2003 |
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| Oh richard...how heartfelt this is...and why were you the fool..did you not take the chance to approach her? this was wonderful...romantic and sweet as a chocolate bar...but you left your audience in the dark....and .....maybe thats what you intended...great write....floria |
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| Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader) |
2/4/2003 |
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| I guess we all play that role sometimes but never give up on the idea of love. Sometimes, it just takes time to find the right one...One. |
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| Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader) |
10/21/2002 |
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| love the contrast of "froze and melted"...smooth flowing words |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
10/21/2002 |
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what better way to be...........
tasty sir |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
10/20/2002 |
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| I agree with Alexander. romance and love. so what if we're fools. It feels good when it's happening, and thats the best and important part. A very smoothe write |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/20/2002 |
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| I like 'street' better than 'floor', but I know it was a dance floor and fools do rush in. |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
10/20/2002 |
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Oh, what a beautifully romantic, so very human..poem, love, just love the...'and i'/oh, just so simply sensual and...sighing!
love this |
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| Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) |
10/20/2002 |
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| Love makes fools of us. But then we write beautiful verse that makes it worthwhile. Very good. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
10/20/2002 |
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| Like this very much Richard, just so bittersweet. |
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