the burn of mother earth
the death of the rebirth
mirrors of the whipping dance
reflections of our world blackened
as it comes to the fire's sabbath
that it will never amend, --- never
the rape of mother earth, turns to clay
as in the death of the rebirth, decayed
as it is the birth of evolutions end,,,
as it comes in the whipping dance,,
the whipping dance of the dead,,,
this world come to the colour, decayed
the colour of it becoming blackened,,
the death of the dreams, hear them scream
the raping in the skies of mother earth
fires igniting in the death of this world,,
the father of demise -- lord of this world,,
nuclear fire -- dawns of the nuclear winter,
turning away in the skies of the blackened,
this shadow cast on our world -- blackened,
as this time of war -- the nation of the fucked
the raping of mother earth -- I pissed away,,
the raping of faith -- the raping of insanity
war had begun -- war had came in time,,,
as it is in war -- mother earth raped,,,,
raped -- raped away into nothing - exiction
casting away in the shadows of this world,
cast from the skies becoming blackended,
ashes in the sky -- from it had blackened,,
Writings From The Grave
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|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Very creative great job !|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|This makes me see so many images, the thinning of the ozone, death of all sorts, war, anger, shit Nick, I could go on and on. This is sad but well written.
Blessings, Janet xoxoxo
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|wowowowow, nick, this is definately worth more than a ten. excellent imagery...>shivers < this deserves much more than a ten...so i'll give you a TWENTY PLUS!! so dark and deep...BRAVO, EXCELLENT!! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|"cast from the skies becoming blackended,
ashes in the sky -- from it had blackened,"
Nick, this is some deep verses.
Very well done.