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Stormy Brooke Swain

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A Beautiful Man
by Stormy Brooke Swain

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A beautiful manů..
puts only God before you.
sees himself in your eyes.
gives you his time.
cares enough to tell you, your beautiful.
loves to hold you.
kisses you every morning when he wakes.
misses you during the day.
laughs at your stupid jokes.
will still run his fingers through your hair.
will give anything for that perfect dress.
treats you like a queen in public.
takes you to an old movie and stays awake.
loves to hold your hand.
stares at you while he eats.
doesn't see other women, the way he sees you.
turns off the game to dance to your song.
cries because you cry.
gets worried if you come home late.
smiles when he is called a beautiful man.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/2/2009
That's the way a man ought to treat the woman he loves, Stormy. Very nicely expressed. Love and best wishes to you and Happy New Year,

Reviewed by Tabitha Carter 1/2/2009
That would be a beautiful man, if only. We must look to what they do, with or without flaws and call them beautiful anyways. Then one day, they may be.
Reviewed by Ted Bossis 5/11/2007
This is precious & real for those who feel -
Reviewed by Bennett 3/4/2007
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 5/27/2006

An outstanding composition in art, contents, rhythm and beauty.
"A Beautiful Man" pays its dues to the poetic treasure, and enriches the pages of Poetry.

I salute You, Poet!

Health, Creativity, Wisdom and Prosperity.

In gratitude,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Goddess Gurl (Reader) 3/25/2006
Perfect Stormy...simple and perfect...thank you...
Reviewed by Diana Bennett (Reader) 10/23/2002
Very beautiful ... happen to have an extra beautiful man?
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/23/2002
stormy, welcome to author's den. hope to see more of your work. :) (love your name!) this is absolutely lovely...i wish all men were like this...but beauty is not only on the outside, it's how a man treats his woman is what's most important...he could be a frog, as bill said, but if he's good to his woman, he's lovelier than the handsomest jerk out there! :) great message in this! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 10/23/2002
Oh how I would love to turn my frog like self into a Beautiful man. But alas I am what I am. Bill