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So What Should I Do?
by Timothy James Foley

Wednesday, October 23, 2002

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I'm out of my head.
I'm gone in my eyes.
I cant feel cuz I feel blind.
I don't know how.
I don' know where.
I don't know when or how to make this right.

I can't make this good.
I can't take it away.
I can't put it back.
I can't make you stay.

This isn't bad.
But it ain't good.
You put your love on me.
Like a crimson hood.
I need the feel.
I love the taste.
We're movin' fast.
No time for pace.

I see your eyes.
When I'm alone.
The darkness in my room.
Replaced by your sight.
You're the vision in my sleep.
The reason of my mind.
My love isn't cruel,
It's a separate kind.

So what should I do?
When I am away?
What should I do?
When I know I can't stay?
Tell me what,
Should,
I,
DO?!

I need your touch.
I want your thoughts.
I want you to sigh.
Feel your flesh get hot.
I want this all.
I need it now.
I feel empty.
Gone somehow.

Well what should I do?
When I need you here?
What should I do?
Will you call my name?
Will you shed a tear?

What should I do?
Tell me, baby.
I need to know.

*A random little long song I complied from the inner depths of my mind. I liked writing it, the loose ryme scheme made it fun.


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Reviewed by Calendula Petal 10/24/2002
This sounds like the perfect song, wonder if it will be a ballard or rock style.
Reviewed by Diana Bennett 10/24/2002
Great write.
Reviewed by Drkman 10/24/2002
Tim
As always a write full of your unique insight and power. This has a great pace and I do like the loose rhyme. It ads some character but the poem isn't dependent on it.
Drkman
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 10/24/2002
I liked the way you did this. Bill
Reviewed by Linda Hill 10/23/2002
Tim, this is a powerful,
intense write! Alot of
emotions coming through
here. Excellent!!!
Reviewed by Linda Hill 10/23/2002
nice rhythm & flow...love the phrase "crimson hood"
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