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| Reviewed by Calendula Petal |
10/24/2002 |
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| This sounds like the perfect song, wonder if it will be a ballard or rock style. |
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| Reviewed by Diana Bennett |
10/24/2002 |
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| Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Drkman |
10/24/2002 |
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Tim
As always a write full of your unique insight and power. This has a great pace and I do like the loose rhyme. It ads some character but the poem isn't dependent on it.
Drkman |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
10/24/2002 |
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| I liked the way you did this. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
10/23/2002 |
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Tim, this is a powerful,
intense write! Alot of
emotions coming through
here. Excellent!!! |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
10/23/2002 |
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| nice rhythm & flow...love the phrase "crimson hood" |
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