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What i couldn't do by shannon M Smith Thursday, October 24, 2002 Share Print Save Become a Fan You did what i couldn't What i could only dream So why am i wishing that thats all this is? ill wake up..but will you be here when i do? Miss you already, its lonely on earth without your words You could have told me to my face, not in a scribbled note. so ill sit here and wonder why you told me to wait things out, that it would all work out. Did you run out of patience? was the world that unkind? questions will remain, but there will be no answers..atleast not from you.
bye William...we'll all miss you

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Reviewed by Drkman	10/25/2002

Shannon, how I had hoped that your silence was due to a peace in your life. This is a sad and powerful write. Bless you child you have suffered so much already. PLB Drkman




Reviewed by Ashley Mulas	10/24/2002

Aww sweetie, I wish I knew the words to answer such questions for you...




Reviewed by Diana Bennett	10/24/2002

My heart goes out to you in your time of grieving.




Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)	10/24/2002

{{{{{{ Shannon }}}}}} Alot of good questions here hun.. Wish there were easy answers. Love you Melanie




Reviewed by Josephine Bohen	10/24/2002

shannon this is so poignant, wishing you peace josie