Do I Know You?
by Betty Rickard
Friday, October 25, 2002
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Hi, do I know you? You, look familiar to me. Why, are you staring that way at me? Tell me have we met somewhere before? Wow, I swear you look like someone I knew before.
Stop staring at me with your bedroom eyes...Is that a smile on your face?
Do you like what you see? Wow, you do look sooooooo, familiar to me...
You sure we haven't met before? No, you can't be that man that walked out my door...That man said he didn't love me anymore...He said he wanted to be free.. your, looking at me with lust in your eyes. You can't be that man the one that left me behind.
Guess what? Now, I'm leaving you behind....It's my turn to tell you bye, byeeeee. But, you sure look soooo, familiar to me. especially, your using ways... Only one difference this time I, didn't let you stay..
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August 7, 2002
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|Reviewed by Erin Taylor
|I read this poem 3 times. The second and third time, I thought how mean this man is to you. I feel I can be one with you. Mentally anyway.|
|Reviewed by Victor Jensen
|Right on! Excellent. - Vic|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Wow! I didn't realize 'til "No, you can't be that man that walked out my door." it was an ex, which gave my mind a quick twist, I love that feeling! Great write, Betty!
|Reviewed by Sean O'Connell
|Fantastic positive attitude expressed here. Long may it stay with you|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Good for you! Kick him out the door. He is a conceited fool anyway. Bill|