|Reviewed by Tien Avielle
|this is my second read of you on this day - I'm bringing out the warm blankets -
tucking you in -
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Your little boy needs to play in the waterfalls :-) Excellent write.|
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal
|too sad, Seen this many times. Its knowing when and how to step in sometimes.
A most excellant write.
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|If this were written in the feminine form, it would be me!!?? What a lovely shock you just gave me, more food for thought...thank you, Sean!
|Reviewed by Betty Rickard
|Excellent write ...So truthful..Shows so much
feelings..Written with so much heart and soul..I found this write excellent..I love the honesty in this poem..
|Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader)
can my little boy come over and play with yours
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Very good write..|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|And how is the little boy now. Grown with the same inner feellngs. Bill|