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| Reviewed by Tien Avielle |
11/6/2002 |
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this is my second read of you on this day - I'm bringing out the warm blankets -
tucking you in - |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/26/2002 |
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| Your little boy needs to play in the waterfalls :-) Excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by Calendula Petal |
10/26/2002 |
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too sad, Seen this many times. Its knowing when and how to step in sometimes.
A most excellant write. |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
10/26/2002 |
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If this were written in the feminine form, it would be me!!?? What a lovely shock you just gave me, more food for thought...thank you, Sean!
Erin
:) |
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| Reviewed by Betty Rickard |
10/26/2002 |
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Excellent write ...So truthful..Shows so much
feelings..Written with so much heart and soul..I found this write excellent..I love the honesty in this poem.. |
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| Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader) |
10/26/2002 |
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outstanding verse
can my little boy come over and play with yours |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
10/26/2002 |
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| Very good write.. |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
10/26/2002 |
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| And how is the little boy now. Grown with the same inner feellngs. Bill |
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