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| Reviewed by Margo Maris |
11/3/2002 |
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| I may be old, but after reading this I realized that I'm not dead! LOL! Terrific Richard! |
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| Reviewed by Adrienne |
10/31/2002 |
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| DANG this is GREAT! Stimulating :) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg |
10/29/2002 |
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Richard ,
I was in the comment last night and the phone rang I ended up hitting send...
I was going to finish with lol and then continue due to thye vampire series yes... this is so beautiful it was romantic and full of under agenda in verse. a longing and an asking heart I felt you did this is class excellent piece here....
Your friend Peg
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
10/28/2002 |
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| omg...just, i can't say...just, to drink of that passion...aroused to be as one with bodies making soul, making that drink, one to...just, hold, damn, i 'felt' this, yes and right inot the womanhood...damn, it, that wine you shared...don't know if i can even 'say' here, oh...damn this, yes, arousing, sensual and so f'ing passionate...in, how did you just make one feel the need/ to share the wine...I am just, well, can't say..did say...GOD! richard, you..you are like into ...it, this was as if, well...shaking legs and feelings gone wanton/wanting... bring the wine, now! |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
10/28/2002 |
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| I'll have another glass... |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
10/28/2002 |
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| wow, richard you knew that was me.... |
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