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one of Those days
by Steve Patterson

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it's been one of Those days.
been in a haze.
to coin a phrase...
"i been in a daze".
my brain feels like a maze.
keep tryin' ta' write a poem
or at least a catchy phrase.
but all the words keep slippin' aways.

nuthin' would begin.
and it sure wouldn't end.
and nuthin' would send
a thought to wrend
an ought that would mend
or bend or lend what i sought.
the words just wouldn't be caught.

oh, there was some fear.
that's always near.
and yeah, there was a tear
or two.
after all, i'm always blue.
but that just wouldn't do.

i wanted sumpin' happy.
sumpin' snappy.
even sumpin' sappy.
you know... toe tappy.

but, it was just one of Those days.
hope it's just a phase.
well, i still got blue.
guess that'll have ta' do.

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Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 10/29/2002
You've done well my friend.

Miss ya, JC xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter 10/29/2002
Hi Steve,
This is too cute for you to be really down--you know, like Neil Diamond--before ya know it ya start to feelin' good." (Smiles) Vicky
Reviewed by Sally Montoye (Reader) 10/29/2002
Looks like you made the best out of it. Good write. Thanks, I enjoyed! Blessings to ya!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/29/2002
man, steve...wish i could write like *you* when i have one of those days...this is absolutely fabulous! awsome!! great use of words! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/29/2002
writer's block..the sworn enemy of poets..and VERY ANNOYING, that!! i *HATE* writer's block with a purple passion!! cute write; this would make a cute c/w tune! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :)

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