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Can You Hear Me, God?
by Laurie J Jeanneret

Thursday, October 31, 2002

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Can you hear me, God?
Are you listening to me?
What have you done?
What were you thinking?
How could you let this be?

You took her!
You stole her!
Vanished like thin air!
You ripped out my heart!
Destroyed their lives!
You're cruel and you're unfair!

You'll never mend my broken heart
And do you even care?
You took their mother!
You took his wife!
You're cruel and you're unfair!

You took the one who made us whole.
She was beautiful and strong.
You took her now and left us what?
an oh so empty soul...

You'll never win me back, you know
You and your great plan
Take your plan and shove it, God
You took her and you ran.

Don't tell me she's where angels sing
and can hear the trumpets blare
Your 'heaven' is now a sham to me
You're cruel and you're unfair

Devils and demons don't scare me can send me there
Hell's fires, screams, and brimstone be damned!
You're cruel and you're unfair!

I'm tired now
I cannot sleep
For me there is no peace, I do not dare
You've taken that away
I want you to remember this
You're cruel...and you're unfair.

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Reviewed by Linn Lindner 11/2/2002
so sorrowful, anger brimming. I get it. I understand. ~~~Linnie
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 10/31/2002

(God) Is To Busy Creating,i.e. He Doesn't Have Time For Mere((Greed Mongering) Human Beings;
As Humanity Goes...

Reviewed by Larry Skahill 10/31/2002
well said
wonderful tribute
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