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Loneliness
by Betty Rickard

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What does it take to mend this heartache and the loneliness I feel? Nothing could compare...You, cut into my very soul the day you walked out of my life you, took control of me..I, sit here crying rivers of uncontrollable tears...As the tears fall my heart breaks of the loneliness that is filling the pits of my soul...

The silence is more that I can take..The quiteness is the loudest noise I ever heard..It is deafening. It screams out my name over and over and over again..I, hold my ears from the sound of the quietness that fills the air..

I look into the mirror to see the face of the person I become..The person who holds all this loneliness and unhappiness..Much to my amazement no reflection is looking back at me..Just a very powerful feeling of sadness...I
feel defeated no reflection of me only the emotion of sadness that overpowers me..It took my whole soul and left me here to dwell in the pits of loneliness..Alone with only the beat of my heart for company..

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©September 13, 2002

This write was written for a poetry contest on loneliness..



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Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 11/1/2002
well done this is strong,powerfull and sad, all the emotions that loneliness conjures up...again well done, very well done...take care of you and yours...Mark ...
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 11/1/2002
Oh Betty... I would take it that you won that contest with this incredible write! You've captured loneliness here with all the emotions. You are a wonderful writer and so blessed to have you as a friend. ((((Betty)))) Have a great weekend, sweetie! hugs, luv and rainbows - Tee :-)
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 11/1/2002
I am guessing you won! Very nice!
Jack
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/1/2002
you describe lonliness quite vividly!! powerful write! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((((HUGS)))))

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