|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Oh that last line really got to me. . A very poignant write Beth|
|Reviewed by Allen Filius (Reader)
|Very good, Expressed well.
Looking forward to seeing more...
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Clever words, "Put on something pretty, something short and tight." Words not meant to be clever ... expressing a simple truth of your need for him to show you the attention that will bridge your lonliness. Were it I, it would surely work. I hope it could work for him. Bill (hugs).|
|Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
|Very nice write! Been there, done that too! Can't wait to read more...|
|Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips
I hit the send button before I could say what I wanted, LOL. (Janet here) I have lived this life and I know what it is about. You write very well, I wish you all of the best. Take care, JC xoxoxo
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell