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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
1/8/2003 |
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| Oh that last line really got to me. . A very poignant write Beth |
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| Reviewed by Allen Filius (Reader) |
11/7/2002 |
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Very good, Expressed well.
Looking forward to seeing more...
Allen
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
11/4/2002 |
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| Clever words, "Put on something pretty, something short and tight." Words not meant to be clever ... expressing a simple truth of your need for him to show you the attention that will bridge your lonliness. Were it I, it would surely work. I hope it could work for him. Bill (hugs). |
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| Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader) |
11/3/2002 |
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| Very nice write! Been there, done that too! Can't wait to read more... |
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| Reviewed by Caldwell Phillips |
11/3/2002 |
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Hi Beth,
I hit the send button before I could say what I wanted, LOL. (Janet here) I have lived this life and I know what it is about. You write very well, I wish you all of the best. Take care, JC xoxoxo
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
11/3/2002 |
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