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|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|This cut right through me. I hurt and I ache and I moan over this sad little tale. Bill|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Oh my god! I was totally not expecting that, what a stunner, which I like, and this part:
Helpless, I knew last
thoughts of little one, how his heart lifted
to think sheíd come to carry him
back home again.
Aches! Life...can suck, more so when the parent consumes the baby birds spirit and leaves rended flesh to try to survive. Great piece, Dawn!