AuthorsDen.com   Join (free) | Login  

   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Regina Pounds, iAndrew Feder, iJohn Howard Reid, iDouglas Skopp, iScott Knutson, iGabriel Boutros, iLeslie Garcia, i

  Home > Memoir > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Books
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 1,653 Titles
· 11,187 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with a friend
· Add to Favorites
·
Member Since: Oct, 2002

Bookmarks
Add this page to
your Bookmarks List
 
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen, click here to update
your web pages on AuthorsDen.com.


   - eBooks
   - Marketplace
   - FaceBook





Popular
Poetry
(Memoir)
  1. They Don't Make 'Em Like My Daddy Anymore,
  2. Birthday in Heaven
  3. Satchel of Tin-Cupped Tea Lites
  4. Garbage Day
  5. The Long Fall (For Kate Clifford)
  6. The Longest Goodbye
  7. A Journey Of Self Discovery
  8. The Promise
  9. A Flower Blooms Amongst A Field Of Tares
  10. Good Night, Dear Mother
  11. A Mothers Love
  12. Two Days
  13. Touch the Sky (Repost)
  14. I Need Him Now (In Memorium)
  15. Riding The Carousel Of Pain

Recent poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
•  Mine Muse
•  Mother-Love
•  Where Art Thou?
•  Sprightly Spring Winds
•  The Unity of Opposites
•  Picking up Pisces
•  Approximation of Lividity
•  The Eye of God Verses the Computer Screen
•  Equalizing the Equation of the Written Word, in Thirteen Parts
•  A Challenge To Humanity!
•  Katy
•  Silence
•  Copper Mountain's River
•  Flouted Pill
           >> View all 1,644
 

Hell's Skin
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Monday, November 04, 2002

Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan


It started on her arm,
discovered by a gentle scratch
after rising from bed.
"A bite!", she thinks,
"Something got in the bed!"
As large as a mosquito bite
but with a pussy center. Okay.
No big deal. Nothing happens,
it doesn't hurt, or really even
itch much. Several days go by
until, one morning, again, she sees
it seems puffy around the edges,
and larger, and, hey, there are lots
of pimple-sized bumps on the arm and,
oh shit, there are lots more of these on
her trunk, front and back. So, being
somewhat worried, rashes are not a big
part of her history, she goes to see
the doctor. A training P.A. asks questions
and looks her over, reporting to his teacher,
who comes and looks and asks questions
and goes to get another doctor who looks
and agrees, an unspecified virile rash.
Hmmm. She knows that can't be good,
viruses are non-treatable. Sent on her way
with nothing, she is troubled. Over the next
few days, all tiny bumps become mosquito bites,
pussy and risen with wrath, and the original
has decided to stretch itself ludicrously, and
the horrible itching starts. Scratching through
flannel helps, fingertip contact with the rash
is...repulsive. Only when sleeping can it be ignored.
As she waits for the weekend to be over to be
able to see a doctor, again,
the pleasure gained by scratching
is overwhelming the mind's knowledge
that it will make matters worse. Time
lengthens into agonizing bouts of infernal
itching.
The itching...
As it creeps up over her face,
and down to her hands
she doesn't know if she can
take it.

Erin Moen
10/13/02

I thought this saga was over with IV, yes, there are 4 Hell's Skin pieces, so far, you would not believe what is going on now...but first, the first.


Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!




Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 11/4/2002
Very graphic in the telling--excellent expression!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/4/2002
Poor girl
sounds horrible....
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 11/4/2002
I sure hope not, Karen, I did take a quick look at your piece a couple of days ago, sounds like it comes on fast and fever, malaise, etc. is present. Still...I'm wondering if I should post the other 3 now, or post them 1 by 1? There is also at least two more I haven't written, and it's possible this will just keep going until my skin starts falling off! I need a referral to see a specialist and the people at our tiny mining clinic ingored my request last week, for reasons unknown. What is the proper etiquette for posting a series here at AD?
Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader) 11/4/2002
yikes how uncomfortable to read
bbbrrrrrrr
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/4/2002
sounds ghastly! does it have anything to do with necrotizing fasciitis? was just curious! good write, though! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Bookmark this page to your Favorites
Featured Authors
| New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.