|Reviewed by Poetry Deborah
What a beautiful, heartfelt and sorrowful piece of poetry. Flows very well and very moving.
Keep on writing!
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|The last stanza shot an electric chill right from my heart into my head, David, as the words ached in my mind...|
|Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann
|Loved this piece .
Great imagry and admired the weel structured meter .
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|ohhhh...this ripped my heartstrings...so emotional...great job, david. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( "always remember and never forget"|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|wow! a very powerful write, indeed! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS)))|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Poignant write and definitely in a perspective not many do see...|
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal
|emotional piece.....how would I feel I wonder?......
excellant read, thanks
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Wow..This is powerful and thought
provoking. It touched me deeply.
The art was perfect for this write.
Awesome write. I love it!
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Must be a good book David. This poem touched the heart. Bill|
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|Excellent write showing the perspective a lot of us do not always see|