Spirals of Spirits
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, November 08, 2002
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Spirits,
unborn souls, earthly deaths,
riven, or lost, where do they go?
Spirals of soul-lives
spinning and
waiting...
marveling...
flying...
"aware",
and then
sliding...
seeking...
soaring...
down to
here,
now,
why not then,
there,
why not on
the moon,
or a galaxy far away?
What if I was a light being?
Speaking in colors,
creating magnificent verbalized paintings
in the blackest void, just
because
I wanted to see the contrast
of absence of light
by
creating light, not one color,
but cosmic rainbows of
speculation, of wondering hues,
of love of space, colors of the soul.
What if I was
a huge, sharply-shapely
crystal, solidified life, checking
the angles of space by
traveling with lines
of parallelisms
and obtuseness?
How would I
see me,
as I am
now...
my
spirit
lives.
I see me
as a triumph, an epiphany
of crystal and light,
a merging of experimentation,
a start with no ending
a fragile clarity
with radial
striations linking me
to
this
now...
continuing
the spiral.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 7/31/02
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| Reviewed by MARGO ENCINAS |
12/9/2002 |
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WONDERFUL WORK, ERIN!
THANK YOU FOR VISITING AND REVIEWING MY POEM, 'WE CHAT'. |
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| Reviewed by Tien Avielle |
11/11/2002 |
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"I see me as a triumph, an epiphany of crystal and light, " - Yes, Erin - you are
a sapphire for my soul! |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
11/8/2002 |
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| i think you spiral splendidly... |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
11/8/2002 |
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how would i see me as i am now
wow awesome
josie |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/8/2002 |
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| Fabulous! I love this Erin...kudos! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/8/2002 |
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| fabulous..I'm a big believer in crystals...I love "sharply-shapely" |
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| Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J |
11/8/2002 |
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Very lovely Erin and thanks for the comment. It is a contest winner in Stories.com
Love from India - Joel - |
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| Reviewed by Dee C. |
11/8/2002 |
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"Speaking in colors,creating magnificence verbalized paintings"...awesome line! We are artist in a sense that we try to paint the world with words to get our point across. Excellent write!
~ Dee |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
11/8/2002 |
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| You did it again ... well done, friend. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
11/8/2002 |
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| now I am out of control, nice |
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