Come to Me Little Girl
by Linda M Hill
Saturday, November 09, 2002
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Hey there little girl..what 's your name?
How would you like to play a little game?
Are you all alone? No one around?
Come here to me and don't make a sound.
Here , have a bit of a chocolate candy bar..
Look over there, see my pretty car?
I wanna take you for a ride, pretty girl..
I'll buy you anything in the world.
Hey there little girl, come to me..
I won't hurt ya, can't you see?
A nice drive in my car over there..
I will take you just anywhere.
We'll go to a nice place , only us two.
Get to know each other..just me and you.
I'll be good, I'll show you around..
Come on little girl, lets leave this town.
A pretty one you are, don't you know?
Come on my girl, time for us to go.
Thats right, lets not let anyone see..
As we walk to my car stay close by me.
Don't be afraid, let me hold to your hand.
I'm not a stranger, I am your friend.
Let's look the doors tight , and be on our way..
You belong to me now, in every way!
© Linda Hill 2002
Authors Note: Talk to your children about the
dangers out there. PLEASE tell them never to get in
a car with a stranger. Awareness could save
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|Reviewed by Sanilnath
|Lovely Thought ... Keep it Up ...
Wishes for this wonderful Write ...
Keep smiling and take care ...
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|a tragic but needed write; children are being murdered or sexually assaulted by those who find pleasure in this sick activity. god help our little ones, and may the bastards who harm our little ones be found, caught, and punished with the severest form of the law..and the sooner, the better! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) and >tears <|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|As well done as ever.|
|Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader)
|There are a lot of those people out there. Hopefully in later years children will realise the dangers that they face. Great write!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|children are so vunerable...|
|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Excellent poem, Linda...great reminder...
|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|It makes me sick to think how many pheodeophiles there are out there! Brilliant and insightful write - especially the 1st paragraph!|
|Reviewed by Phelicia Brown
|I have daughters and this has made me really want to stress even the more to them the importance of not talking to or going with strangers. This piece is so well done.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
How Sick Humanity Is,i.e. But, Then They Meet Me TRASK__I Am Beyonfd Your (There) Worst Nightmare,It Is Only The Beginning To The Horrid Exscruciating Pain I Will Inflict Upon Child Molesters & Those Politicians, Any Human Being Who Continues To LetThis Happen__
__You (All) Are Just As Guilty In The Eye's Of (God)
|Reviewed by Bill Sowman
|Hon ... if you get a chance please read Peggy Bertrand's "Little Match Girl." I just did and my eyes are still wet from reading it.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|This is so sad a situation. A terrible thing that may end in death at the worst. Or scarred for life. You portray this so well Linda. So very well and we need to keep this on our minds and in our hearts. There has to be a way for society to deal with this. Bill xo P.S.
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