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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
12/7/2002 |
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| good one |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
12/4/2002 |
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Hi Sweets!
I like the free verse very much. I think that you've done a great job here. I guess, I am the opposite, I write in end-rhyme very little these days though in the beginning that's all that I did. (other than internal rhyme, which I do love) Anyway, I think it's good.
Love, JC xoxoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) |
12/2/2002 |
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| True beauty of thought comes out in the images created on the page. and wether this rhymed or not the beauty and style are a gift to the reader |
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| Reviewed by Steve Reichard |
12/1/2002 |
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Fantastic poem! and I really enjoyed reading it.
Steve |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
11/14/2002 |
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| your transition to free verse is as smooth as your deliver of thought.. this is simply wonderful! katy. |
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| Reviewed by TOMSDATTAR |
11/11/2002 |
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| enjoyed the read!! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
11/11/2002 |
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Hey Sis! It's really very strange.....because I too have been playing around with free verse...My heart will always remain with the flow of rhyme but I enjoy free. This is fantastic....above all you are a poet..the form doesn't matter for your words are always perfect. Ty, Dani
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| Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) |
11/11/2002 |
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| I love this, Melissa, and I agree with what everyone said here, and especially, with Eileen... |
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| Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader) |
11/11/2002 |
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I liked this one! Nowadays I write mostly in freeverse. There's no restriction, and the words flow so much easier. Great write!
Cheers,
Tim |
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| Reviewed by Sally Montoye |
11/11/2002 |
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| The message of your words is loud and clear. That's all that counts in my book. I like!!! |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
11/11/2002 |
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| I see hon that you are developing quite a following here (and deservedly so). You are masterful in your ability to rhyme with the same wonderful quality that keeps you a step higher than the other poets. Your talent prevails. I will have our song posted here as quick as I can. Sandie Angel has been helping me to get them on this site. please check out my tonight's post of a song titled: "Linda" my heart is broken but I will rebound quickly. I feel that pretty soon my songs will start getting picked up. keep your fingers crossed. Your good friend and hopefully someday we will write together again. Bill |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
11/10/2002 |
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| True poetic growth comes from trying new things. And you are too good not to grow ... !!!!! Well done. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/10/2002 |
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| As on your last post I said you already have it in hand Melissa, I don't think you would have a problem with any style,you have a true poetic soul;-)this write is excellent in all ways... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/10/2002 |
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| wonderful that you have tried another style and you have done really well with it. I feel a gentle flow all the way through and your words had great timing. Keep up the good writing. I like this one :-) |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
11/10/2002 |
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I think you already have a sense of how much freeverse allows you the freedom of expression without the confines of rhyme and pattern. We already know you are a master in writing rhyme and meter but it is awesome who you have expanded so readily to the world of freeverse as well. Never give up on any style developed within your arsenal...but always expand that universe of expression as much as you can in every form that you can. There is no doubt you have the ability to master them all.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
11/10/2002 |
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I love it, someone on another site
mentioned that I rhyme too much and that I should experiment with freeverse.... |
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