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Sex on The Beach
by Betsy

Monday, November 11, 2002

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The crashing waves dance on our feet.
The wet sand between our toes.
The beach towel crumpling with every touch of your fingertips.
My bikini top lies on the sand under the palm tree.
And the bottoms have been cast out to sea.
Your tongue reminds me of the feel of the ocean.
Wet and warm and pleasureful.
Your nourishment tastes like the saltwater of the sea,
You taste my oceanwater as well.
We're hot and steamy,
your erect,
I'm dreamy.
You grab the towel, I clutch your shoulder,
And we become one in all ecstacy.
As We moan and sigh orgasms sent to the sea.
We've had the tastiest sex on the beach.

mmmmm, sex on the beach, that sounds fun!

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Reviewed by Debbie Lacy 1/8/2012
This poem brings back a memory Betsy! Umm sweet tender pleasure of love ecstacy on the beach! I love it! Thanks for sharing :)

Reviewed by Maddy van Deevers (Reader) 7/5/2003
Another good one....however the last line sort of bugged me for some reason, I think because of the overt reference to sex, while the rest of the poem is oblique. as a suggestion, perhaps something like: "We've had the tastiest time on the beach"
Something like that would, in my eyes at any rate, maintain the feel of the rest of the piece.
Good stuff...Write on...
Reviewed by satan165 aka bigbossman (Reader) 3/8/2003
nice refering to the sex as 'tasty', thats very vivid
Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader) 11/18/2002
You lose a point for steamy/dreamy....but at least it's a bit more subtle. I like subtle poetry, but don't think I'm judging you when I review.
Reviewed by Dennis Michels (Reader) 11/13/2002
Very nice, and you kindly left out the sand in the cravasse reference. :-)
Reviewed by Charles McKenzie (Reader) 11/12/2002
More, baby, more...gimme more
Reviewed by 11/12/2002
Yes! On the beach! Excellent place to be.;)
Reviewed by Margie Hess 11/11/2002
i'd like two of those with little umbrellas please. this is very good betsy, was it good for you too?
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