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| Reviewed by Jen Bennett |
11/13/2002 |
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| very good. maybe its me or your muse seems extremely provocative in this poem. Jen |
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| Reviewed by Drkman |
11/13/2002 |
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Tim
Another great installment to this continuing thought process you are sharing with us. I really like the lines below.
"I talk too much to make no sense.
But break up these letters and drink out my disease"
How true for me that as a writer I am guilty of talking too much and spilling out a form of psycho babble, mental mush if you will.
Drkman |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
11/12/2002 |
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11-12-02
Sounds like when you're in High School?
TRASK
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
11/12/2002 |
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| This was probably more productive than my knowledge that there were 42,672 holes in the acoustic tiles of the ceiling in Geometry. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/12/2002 |
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Shhhhh!..... I don't write poetry in class, but I write it at work.....sometimes!...
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
11/12/2002 |
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Yeah I'm with you...very cool writing indeed. I used to write poetry during class too.
Thanks, Dani |
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