|Reviewed by Jen Bennett
|very good. maybe its me or your muse seems extremely provocative in this poem. Jen|
|Reviewed by Drkman
Another great installment to this continuing thought process you are sharing with us. I really like the lines below.
"I talk too much to make no sense.
But break up these letters and drink out my disease"
How true for me that as a writer I am guilty of talking too much and spilling out a form of psycho babble, mental mush if you will.
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Sounds like when you're in High School?
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|This was probably more productive than my knowledge that there were 42,672 holes in the acoustic tiles of the ceiling in Geometry.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Shhhhh!..... I don't write poetry in class, but I write it at work.....sometimes!...
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Yeah I'm with you...very cool writing indeed. I used to write poetry during class too.