Sex in the Mind of a Man
Wednesday, November 13, 2002
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Where is she?
Oh well, I'll just call one of those escort agencies.
Ooh, This girl has huge knockers,
I think as she walks in the door.
She looks familiar,
Have I hired her before?
Oh well, I'm getting a boner,
Can't wait anymore.
She takes off her clothes, and asks what I like.
I say that she can just please me and my little "tike."
She's damn good at bj's!
Suckin hard as she takes off my pj's!
Buddy's poping out, getting harder by the second, She stops sucking and I grab her tits.
I suck and lick them, and she gets her kicks, Moving down slowly,
To her womanhood, so juicy inviting me in.
I spread her legs apart,
Damn! I fart, oh well,
gas go to hell.
Im getting lucky,
I put my tongue in and drink and sucky.
She gets hot, and explodes in my mouth,
Up and down her body my fingers move about.
Screw the foreplay!
I need to calm my penis.
I stick my hard man into what makes her under venus.
I start riding her hard, and she moans
I talk dirty at her, like she's my little slave.
(I'm paying her, so if she dont like it I'll scratch up her cave!)
And just when I was about to take her to the farthest and keep her.
My lady walked in and screamed at me,
Off did that little prostitute flee!
(After getting my money from me)
My girl slapped me and I said I was sorry.
So, we had the besty sex to make up.
Lucky twice in one day,
That's the way!
Sex through a guys mind, I just wanted to try something at a different point of view.
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|Reviewed by Debbie Lacy
|Very hot! I like! Thanks for sharing more! ")
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|hmmm I can see you have never been with a Dark Knight-I could greatly revise that poetry idea-LOL|
|Reviewed by Masood Lohar
|it is very nicely written poem and very entertaining but I think men don't totally behave like this. (Though they are like this in the broder terms)... :)|
|Reviewed by Maddy van Deevers (Reader)
|I think a lot of you missed the point....It is to me a woman's attempt to visualise a sexual fantasy from a man's point of view...a rather daring undertaking. And admit it guys, anyone of you would love to get out of being caught in flagarante delecto by screwing your significant other silly...it sure beats the silent treatment or being served papers.|
|Reviewed by satan165 aka bigbossman (Reader)
|this is a bad generalization of a man, maybe of a teenager. a real man would throw on some porn(anabolic or diabolic ONLY) and beat off before he calls a dirty whore. this character is a little out of control sexually also....need to keep your compsure a bit more|
|Reviewed by No Longer Member (Reader)
|I guess I can sum up, from a women's point of view, is that you have a really selfish partner or some really stupid Johns.|
|Reviewed by Kristin Barletta (Reader)
|Fuck the naysayers, you got a lot to proud of, and a fine ass too... mmmmm!|
|Reviewed by Nancy
|Your picture sums it up as well as to what you wrote. You must still be on your party.
|Reviewed by Charles McKenzie (Reader)
|I bet betsy sex is the best sex...|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Betsy, I personally have never known a man who acted that way, but I'm sure there are many types of people in the world I've never met. I think to know men of class you must be a woman of class. It's good to try new things in your writing but I think what some of the men here are saying is this, you as a woman should want to be respected (I Hope)by men, and they as men expect the same respect from a woman. This might be better posted under Relationships, there are all kinds of relationships, however it is anything but romantic. Keep writing and trying new things.|
|Reviewed by BadBoy
|I just wish I was your motorcycle! Most of these guys just don't want to admit that they like to get down and dirty sometimes, and I think putting it as blatantly as you did was pretty brave.
As for you being to skinny as Fat Girl said, well, she's just jealous. Hell! She probably weighs more than that bike!
|Reviewed by Dennis Michels
I think you have expressed an embarassing insight into carnal intuition. I can say I wouldn't act like that, but, perhaps its because I'm an author, I have thought like that. I found the language arousing and the imagery sexual.
|Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Altho I personally know a few guys who act this way. If you wanted to write something funny on the subject, you should have listed it as humor. I must rate it as a 6. I wish I could not rate it. Not to be mean to you, but it did hurt my feelings that you were writing about romance and it was not romantic at all.
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|If these are the men you know you have my sympathies. Nice try - no cigar.|
|Reviewed by Fat Girl
|You're way too skinny, and your poem is lousy.
|Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader)
|interesting journey with a woman into the mind of a man|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Can't say I've ever met a man like this...but see I think I have a high opinion of myself...and I only date men with copious amounts of class. Um are you sure you didn't mould this guy on Homer Simpson? :p As for Mitchell's response....I actually think he was being very adult..He's honest, a fantastic writer…and obviously a man of class. Anyway thanks for the peek into the other side…seems to me though a person is only treated how they allow themselves to be. Keep writing.....it's good to try new things.
|Reviewed by Betsy
|well, I'm sorry you feel that way, I was just trying something new, It was fun to do and I don't think giving it a five is an adult thing to do. Maybe you have class, but not all men do!|