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The Teddy Bear (responding to dreamweavers challenge)
by Jack R Roberts

Sunday, November 17, 2002

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Iím not the man that I was when this day began
Iíll try to explain but Iím not sure I can
I looked up to the sky while I was walking downtown
And I saw a big white teddy bear looking down

It just cant be real this thing that I see
It is made out of clouds and its looking at me!
I broke out in sweat as I stood in that place
As the bear just looked down with a smile on his face

Am I losing my mind? Can this really be?
Iíll find someone to ask if they too can see
Before anyone else could see this display
The big teddy bear had just drifted away

I got home from a day that had just changed my life
And I started to share this big bear with my wife
But as I hung up my coat, and put my hat on the shelf
I decided its best to keep this bear to myself

Jack Roberts - Nov 18 2002

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Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook 11/19/2002
I like this one, Jack...but agree it's best to keep it to yourself ~ unless you had a camera to verify it! Great write.
Reviewed by Victor Jensen 11/19/2002
I've seen many things that I wouldn't tell anyone about of course they weren't all in the sky either. Don't see as many anymore since I quit drinking twenty years ago. I'm not suggesting you were under the influence and there's nothing wrong with having an active imagination. It makes for some of the best poetry as this one shows. - Vic
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 11/18/2002
Jack, you done this with great ease. And done it well. But I like you,,would keep these teddy bear clouds to myself,,it would be kinda hard to explain,,,great write,,Lisa
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/18/2002
great response, jack! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) p.s.: check out my version of the challenge!! :)
Reviewed by Linda Hill 11/18/2002
Great response, my friend.
You have a great
imagination and talent.
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 11/18/2002
Fun response, Jack. Well done.
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie 11/18/2002
Great write Jack... well done!!!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 11/18/2002
This was wonderful Jack...Yes if you had told her about the bear she might think you were "looney tunes"

Nature always has the best suprises. Ty, Danielle
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/18/2002
This is wonderful, I love it.
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader) 11/18/2002
hhahaha yes, just give her a big bear hug instead.
Lovely, just lovely!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/17/2002
Great response to the challenge Jack...really imaginative;-)
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 11/17/2002
LOL... Thanks Jack.. for taking up the Picture Challenge. This is great. On that note.. I best head off to bed. Thanks for the much needed smile.
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