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Cloud Teddy Bear ( In Response to Dreamweavers Challenge)
by Linda M Hill
Monday, November 18, 2002

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I look up at the sky..and staring at me..
Is a cloud teddy bear God wanted me to see.
Last night I had prayed for a teddy bear to hold.
As I lay in my bed and shivered from the cold.
I am just a little girl...Mama does the best she can..
Daddy left us years ago..he was a drinkin' man.
Mama works in a diner...not much to call her own..
But she gives me more love than I've ever known.

I wondered if anyone else saw the little teddy bear..
As it looked down at me from high up in the air.
In my worn dress and shoes I felt a silent tear..
As I looked up in the Heavens I felt Jesus near.
I knew this beautiful cloud would stay in my heart..
And warm my soul when sadness would start.
I ran to tell my Mama of the beautiful cloud in the air..
When I went to show her the cloud wasn't there.

Mama held my hand as we walked in the cold..
I went to my room and low and behold..
There was a fluffy white teddy bear on my bed...
Around its neck was a bright ribbon of red.
From the sky the teddy bear didn't disappear
In Gods great miracles He had sent it here.
I looked up at Mama as she had tears on her face..
We both knew that a miracle had just taken place.

© Linda Hill 2002


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Reviewed by Drkman (Reader) 11/19/2002
Nice story Linda. Very tender
Drkman
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 11/18/2002
What a wonderful story you have created for this picture, capturing abit of joy in a small child's unfair world.

Erin
:)_
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/18/2002
Linda...a beautiful heart warming write as only you can do them...;-)
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader) 11/18/2002
sniff....just beautiful!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 11/18/2002
standing ovation...perfection! rah, rah, rah! (three cheers for linda). (((HUGS))) and love, karla. (the pic is adorable!)
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/18/2002
Beautiful as always, Linda. There never was a doubt.
Amor
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 11/18/2002
11-18-02 Re: This Brought Tear's To My Eyes...

Linda__ (God) Works In Mystyerious Ways,i.e.
Over past years I have Collected some 2oo Teddy Bears To Give To Little Children Thru My Nonprofit Corporation___

I Can't Wait for that Day Whence The Time Is
Right I, TRASK will do Just That__

I never had A Teddy Bear as a Child, Nor The Loveing Parents Nor Knew What a Hug Was,i.e. I drive to Ohio Visit my AuntIda, She Hugged Me More Times Than In a Life time Of My Bastard Parents!

Don't Buy Your Children Toys & Games; Buy Them Teddy Bears, Hug Them Daily, Let Them Know You Still Care Even Whence their 20,30,50 Years Old__

You'll Hear & Remember Your Little Children Say":

" I Will Be Good"___ Not Bad, Not On Drugs, In Gangs, Molesting, Raping, Maiming, Killing,Little Children As They Grow Up!!

There's The SIMPLE __There's The OBSCURE,i.e.
Politicians, Religion, Greed Trying To Tell You How To Control & Raise Your Children Our Children!!

YourFriend, TRASK
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 11/18/2002
Oh Hon, you truly captured the picture well. Thanks so much for meeting my challenge.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 11/18/2002
You met this challenge with a standing ovation! Great write,,sweet and tender thoughts,,,Lisa
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 11/18/2002
Very beautiful Linda
Reviewed by Sanilnath 11/18/2002
Really Superb ...The Picture was really Superb ...

OK Good Write TOooo ... Where did u get the picture from ? Really it made the Write so beautiful ... Loved all the three ... The Write ... The Picture and My Friend ..

All stand Good ... Keeep Writing and Keep smiling ... Wishes for u always for ur good deeds ... Only for Ur Good Deeds ...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/18/2002
oh, i never saw the teddy bear until just now!! neat!! and what a great write, as you can only do! thanks for your review; by the way! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :)
Reviewed by William M. Sowman 11/18/2002
Yes my dear, I too can see the cloudy Teddy Bear up high in the far right corner. And the little bear was sent by God to offer us hope and entrnal salvation. What a beautiful bear, so white and fluffy with charcoal eyes. We all need a cheerful little Teddy Bear in our lifes. The little girl has hers, and I want to be your little Teddy Bear Linda. Your symbol of love and hope for as long as I live. I will always be Linda Mae's loving little Teddy Bear. You are so sweet honey. So good. Oh my what else can Bill say about his Lady. (((hugs)))
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/18/2002
This is so special, Linda, I loved it.
Reviewed by Justin Vargas (Reader) 11/18/2002
Good write...
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 11/18/2002
Heart Wrenching - Three cheers for Linda
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