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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/24/2003 |
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| You got that right! |
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| Reviewed by Linn Lindner |
11/28/2002 |
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| very true, intense, there is that in all of us. This one hit and hurt...but it's such a beautiful pain. ~~~Linnie |
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| Reviewed by Linn Lindner |
11/19/2002 |
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| delicate description of the raw truth |
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| Reviewed by Justin Vargas |
11/18/2002 |
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| Richard, this peice is very excellent. With every intense emotion coming forth into play. Very good write. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/18/2002 |
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| we must persue the demons within ourselves and confronting them realize they are relly angels sent to deliver us... the flesh must get to know itself... i think this is an excellent expression on the duality of human nature... |
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
11/18/2002 |
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quite stunning, richard, dark and...yet, i agree w/Roger, also...
the poem, itself...just a stuuner...
'to say love is an understatement that snaps even as the whip...' and the last line, oh leaves one just...just dumbfounded/awed in fear?/anticipation of...?
strange, but truth is really not a pretty thing, is it? & pleasure/pain...sometimes is what makes us so vulnerable to the haunted aspects of our own personal human experience...bravo on this one, dark, very...but the raw honetsy you are not afraid to show...( as for de sade...have you seen "Quills"...very well done ... and reminscent of this piece) bravo for a frightening/awesome piece here...+++
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
11/18/2002 |
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| Heavy reading Richard. Excellent. a reply to Roger: I think it's in all of us, to what degree, well, it varies |
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| Reviewed by Roger Ochs |
11/18/2002 |
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| While sado-masochistic relations are not my cup of tea, I wonder if there is not a masochistic element in most human relationships. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/18/2002 |
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| very dark, graphic write *shudders* intense...great write here, richard! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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