As This Little Poem Is For My Little Friend Freddy In Grade School Then!
by - - - - - - - TRASK
Monday, November 18, 2002
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As (God) Will Get You For This Tear's In His Eyes...
Little Freddy Wasn't a Teddy Bear But, a Little Guy,
Every Time They Picked On Him, Beat Him Up, Cry,
He Did Not, Tear's In His Eyes He'd Scream___
(God) Will Get You For This; Like Me, TRASK, He
Little Freddy Would Not Cry; He'd Walk Away, Be
It Why Do They (Pick On Me) Beat Me Up(?)__
Never Did I Say a Thing To You Freddy Until Now,
Little Did Freddy Know (God) Me, I,TRASK, Vow,
I Did Get Them; Richie Biggest Ox Of Them All, He_
Did Pick On Me In The Same, push Me Only So Far__
He Will Never Forget Me,Nor His Father, Nor (As) the Police,
Don't F--k With Me,TRASK, Cold Of Winter, Decrease
The Size Of His Nose, Me, I, Almost as Small As__
Freddy, Richie as Big As An Ox, Hit The Ground,
His Face Slide Across Ice, Blood Flowed The Snow, Bound
In His Face, I Stepped On His Broken Nose__
Went Upon My Way (I Didn't Look Back) To__
School, 7th Grade,i.e. I Had a Toothache That Day,
All It Took to Get Me Off, As I Thought Of , In Dismay,
Little Freddy Getting Beat Up(Again) No More; As I Was_
In Richie's Face; As Speeding Bullet Cuts Card
In The Photo,I, TRASK Will Be Agating, Retard,
It, You,Human Race Is (Must) Put In Your Place__
For In The Eye's Of (God), I, TRASK Am__
In Your Face...
Retribution, TRASK c 2002 TRASK
Etal: For All You Little (You Are Strong) Guys Who Are Bullied, Picked On By Those Big Ox's and/or Burror's; Out There;Just
Say In Your Mind, . This Very Moment, (God) Will Get You For This__
I Do Not Have To Promise You, (God), TRASK (Is) Will Be There__And,While Your . It ; Take Some Karate Classes...
Richies Father a Lieutenant, To Be Chief Of Police!?
Freddy, I Do Know You Are Out There Reading This;
As Now Freddy,You Know (God) Did Get Them (Him), Prior To Moving From Back East, Richie, As He Addressed Me, TRASK As Sir__ Reason Why Be:
His Father Never Made Chief Police; Sent RichieTo
US Air Force By Act Of Courts__8 Years or True,You
Go To Jail; As He, His Friend ,Raped a Girl in Grade
School, The Big Ox Went In,Came Out Air Force, Fade Did Not His Memory, As He (Timid / Afraid) Whence I In Pretending, As I Arced My Hand (Across) In His Face...
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|Reviewed by sophie merrick (Reader)
|i have never read any of your poems before this one, your style is extraordinary, good to see some really original poetry. keep it up.
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Powerful and moving write...
Also glad that you didn't stand by and watch Freddy be bullied...
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|There is a direct connection betwixt individuals as bullies and nations as the same.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|This is sad but it has hope also that you cared enough to be there for little Freddie.
Without you there would have been no one. Bill
|Reviewed by TR
Dear Robert__ Little Freddy As Real As Most Of My Classmates Were,i.e. The Big Ox's Or Burrors In California Do Always Fall Right On There Face(s), Most Will never Live Past 15/18 Years of Age__
Everytime I See Another Mexicanos Baby Born
Without Parents__(Parental Neglect)__
I View " IT " As Here Is (Comes)Another Future
"Gang Banger",i.e. I've Lived in High Crime Riden Area Past 12 Years, Mostly Mexicanos, Blacks, Mixed As Like The Animals They Are, Have Become, They Just Fall By The Wayside Right On Into There Graves__
Here Comes The Sick Part As I Watch___(Collect Your Welfare Tax $$$)
There " Pretend Momma's " Cry Real Tear's...And, As SAD As It Is: I Watch Those Good (Real) Momma's Sigh__ Ask Why!?
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent write... very different theme... question: is Freddy really an alternate self?|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Strong and Intense Poem,
my friend. One of your best..
I never liked seeing the bullies
pick on the smaller and frailer
children. I'm glad that you took
up for Little Freddie. I bet you
were the only one who did.