Teddy In The Sky ( Dreamweavers Challenge)
by Paul Francis Mc Cann
Monday, November 18, 2002
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I prayed God would send me a Teddy bear,
I need cuddles and no one seems to care .
I wish I had some one to hug me tight ,
it's lonely when you're all alone at night .
I'm just a lonely little baby boy ,
I wish that I had a friendly soft toy .
One that I could hold and could call my own ,
it's terrible when you're small and alone .
The clouds passed by as the sunshine fell down,
I snapped a picture up there I had found ,
A Teddy Bear was floating through the sky,
I caught a glimpse of it as it passed by .
A lost teddy bear right over my place .
God knew this little boy with a sad face ,
So he posted me Teddy in the sky .
Now I am so happy and I won't cry
Teddy and I are such a happy pair ,
I'm a little boy with a Teddy bear .
By Paul Mc Cann
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|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|Excellent write Paul (( hugs )) Thank you soo much for taking the challenge. And doing it with such grace as well. BTW It's nice to meet you. I've not been as active in the Den as I used to be so haven't had a chance to properly say hello.
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Well done. You portray the softer, more wistful side of our maleness.|
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|As my daughter would say--"Swwweeet!"...|
|Reviewed by Ashley Tabor (Reader)
|Awww another great write. Well done!|
|Reviewed by Paul Bright (Reader)
|pretty sweet. makes a great big "awwww"|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Reviewed by David Leigh (Reader)
|Nice write Paul.|