Allergy Face! (By Ronee')
by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Tuesday, November 19, 2002
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Oh, how I HATE this, this allergy face!
It is somethin' I wish I could just ERASE!
My nose runs, and my eyes run and tear;
And it feels like I have a cold all year!
I cough, and I honk like a Canada goose;
And I wonder if the mucus will EVER break loose!!
In addition, I wheeze, sound like I am dyin'--
This allergy mess sure is mighty tryin'!!
It is really a drag, havin' allergies and stuff--
And it's about time I yell "THAT'S ENOUGH!!"
I am so tired of bein' sick, I hate it so much---
But I need a Kleenix's soft and tender touch!! |
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Ronee' has allergies, and she suffers horribly because of it. This is another one of her rants!!
(She also has asthma, which coincides with her allergies.)
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
2/27/2003 |
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| allergies make me cry good Job ! |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
11/19/2002 |
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Very good and I understand myself I hate allergies! Hugz From your friend In California
YSIC
~Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
11/19/2002 |
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| i agree with william, you capture poetry at its best. great write...poor little ronee'! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
11/19/2002 |
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| Yes dear one, we all suffer from these same afflictions. What can you do? I have no soulution. Bill |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
11/19/2002 |
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Well done Karen,
You capture poetry, at its best,
great write.
William Bonilla |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
11/19/2002 |
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| Cute ... and I understand completely!!!! I hate allergies, too! |
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