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I Am What I Am
by jing javier

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I'm a lemon with a twist
I'm a dewdrop full of mist
I'm a child filled with bliss
I'm but a gentle kiss

I'm invisible but I show
I'm a burnt out lamp that still does glow
I'm bold though you may not know
I'm a horn that does not blow

I'm used but still brand new
I'm a mystery without a clue
I'm false but forever true
I'm myself and also you

I'm deaf but I can also hear
I'm afraid but yet I have no fear
I'm forever constant throughout the year
I'm smart and my actions make it clear

I'm with the flowers opening their buds
I don't fight with fists but with hugs
I'm a push without the shove
Creeping softly I am *LOVE*

I see the hearts of millions set up in flares
I taste the bitter words and nasty stares
I'm someone sometimes living in strife
Creeping softly I am *LIFE*

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Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Holy cow, this is fantastic, Jing!! Lovely sequence and flow, word choices and imagery from such, and the truth of it all, superb! :)
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
oh my, you are ...good at summaries! Thanks for reading me, and drawing me here!
Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Sing that song. Very eloquent. Thanks for sharing.

Afrika M.A.Abney
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
having just come from your piano poem, my first thought here was 'songs in the key of life'.. though not my words, I think they fit.. this just hums along and is simply fascinating from start to end. I love rhyme and rhythm.. you have a beauty in this one. katy.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Beautiful! This was a beautiful piece, a great write, keep it up!
Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann
So beautiful and true . I think life paints a picture with many faces . You have painted in this piece quite a few . Thank you ,
Well said .
Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Jing, This is quite grand! I love the rhyming scheme you've used! This is so true. It flows like soft butter on your tongue. And the picture you have above it is brilliant! You've really got a good one here!
Brittany Reneé
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
love it
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
Superb and so very honestly fresh and true, i loved the buzz out of this, it pulled me right in and spoke volumes to me, truly well done with this, take care...Mark ...
Reviewed by Roger Ochs
A marvelous rhythmic write and potent message. Bravo.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Truly gorgeous Jing….A poem that flows beautifully….Ty, Dani
Reviewed by jude forese
very creative & flows well...
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Very nice write Jing, I liked this.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
This very innovative Jing...beautifully done;-)!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
You are excellent
and you are awesome!
Reviewed by Terry McDermott
This is original. You are very talented.
Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
This is very creative and beautiful!

The Voice
Thanks for the prayers.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Wow I love every word this flow and rhyme is magnifient."I'm with the flowers opening their buds
I don't fight with fists but with hugs
I'm a push without the shove
Creeping softly I am *LOVE* "
Excellent write!!!
Lady Peg :)

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