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I Am What I Am
by jing javier
Friday, November 22, 2002

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I'm a lemon with a twist
I'm a dewdrop full of mist
I'm a child filled with bliss
I'm but a gentle kiss

I'm invisible but I show
I'm a burnt out lamp that still does glow
I'm bold though you may not know
I'm a horn that does not blow

I'm used but still brand new
I'm a mystery without a clue
I'm false but forever true
I'm myself and also you

I'm deaf but I can also hear
I'm afraid but yet I have no fear
I'm forever constant throughout the year
I'm smart and my actions make it clear

I'm with the flowers opening their buds
I don't fight with fists but with hugs
I'm a push without the shove
Creeping softly I am *LOVE*

I see the hearts of millions set up in flares
I taste the bitter words and nasty stares
I'm someone sometimes living in strife
Creeping softly I am *LIFE*




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Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 11/30/2002
Holy cow, this is fantastic, Jing!! Lovely sequence and flow, word choices and imagery from such, and the truth of it all, superb! :)
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader) 11/25/2002
oh my, you are ...good at summaries! Thanks for reading me, and drawing me here!
Reviewed by Afrika Abney 11/25/2002
Sing that song. Very eloquent. Thanks for sharing.

Afrika M.A.Abney
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 11/24/2002
having just come from your piano poem, my first thought here was 'songs in the key of life'.. though not my words, I think they fit.. this just hums along and is simply fascinating from start to end. I love rhyme and rhythm.. you have a beauty in this one. katy.
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 11/23/2002
Beautiful! This was a beautiful piece, a great write, keep it up!
~Michelle~
Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann 11/23/2002
So beautiful and true . I think life paints a picture with many faces . You have painted in this piece quite a few . Thank you ,
Well said .
Reviewed by Brittany Renée 11/23/2002
Jing, This is quite grand! I love the rhyming scheme you've used! This is so true. It flows like soft butter on your tongue. And the picture you have above it is brilliant! You've really got a good one here!
Brittany Reneé
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 11/23/2002
love it
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 11/23/2002
Superb and so very honestly fresh and true, i loved the buzz out of this, it pulled me right in and spoke volumes to me, truly well done with this, take care...Mark ...
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 11/23/2002
A marvelous rhythmic write and potent message. Bravo.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 11/23/2002
Truly gorgeous Jing….A poem that flows beautifully….Ty, Dani
Reviewed by jude forese 11/22/2002
very creative & flows well...
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 11/22/2002
Very nice write Jing, I liked this.
Jack
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/22/2002
This very innovative Jing...beautifully done;-)!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 11/22/2002
excellent!
You are excellent
and you are awesome!
Reviewed by Terry McDermott 11/22/2002
This is original. You are very talented.
Reviewed by The Voice (Reader) 11/22/2002
Jing,
This is very creative and beautiful!

The Voice
Thanks for the prayers.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 11/22/2002
Jing,
Wow I love every word this flow and rhyme is magnifient."I'm with the flowers opening their buds
I don't fight with fists but with hugs
I'm a push without the shove
Creeping softly I am *LOVE* "
Excellent write!!!
Lady Peg :)
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