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Tell me, you love me,
In the morning,
When the first light appears,
And the mockingbirds, sing their song.
As the eastern, sky blazes,
With bright colors,
Inching their way,
From the horizon dusk.
Tell me, you love me,
When the sun, is high overhead,
And the heat is unbearable,
As we stay neath, an umbrella spread.
Tell me, you love me,
When the sun sizzles, into the ocean,
After a glorious sunset,
As your lips, I gently caress.
Tell me, you love me,
When the dark skies,
Brings forth sight,
Of a majestic, full moon.
Tell me, you love me,
When I whisper,
Sweet nothings,
As we melt, into each other's arms.
Tell me, you love me,
Between your moans and groans,
Assessing, our passionate love,
As the night, yields it's mating songs.
By William Bonilla
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
11/28/2002 |
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| I must have my love read this.. a 'day in the life' then a passionate ending.. sigh. This is so nice. katy. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
11/23/2002 |
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| One of your most lovely, I really like this one. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
11/23/2002 |
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William,
"Tell me, you love me,
When I whisper,
Sweet nothings,
As we melt, into each other's arms. "
I love your poetry it speaks such romance and is elegant in the whispers of love that flow so smoothly in imagery and verse. I am a romantic and these words are like fuel to the soul.
Thank you!!!
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by jing javier |
11/23/2002 |
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| lovely write.. |
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| Reviewed by Adam Walsvik |
11/23/2002 |
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| with a heart like yours how necessary is this poem? seriously, this is the very coat of arms of love. Miraculous. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
11/23/2002 |
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Don't you just love the melt in each others arms bit? ;)
Very beautiful write...Just lovely to go with my afternoon Chardonnay..
Ty, Dani
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