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A love I had once long ago,
Haunts me still, it seems,
For when I fall asleep at night
She comes to me in dreams.

I know I can't possess her,
I know I never will,
But I can hold her in my heart
And ease my pain at will.

She was wounded when I found her,
Gave her love and made her whole,
Then her old love came and claimed
Her and she left and took my soul.

In my dreams at night I hold her,
In my dreams she loves me still-
Yet I know I can't possess her
And I know I never will..









           

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Reviewed by Theresa Hughes (Reader)
This is the poem you told me today. Awesome to know someone can put life into words. You made my day. I sooo dread the time at the hospital. Thanks for being in the seat next to me in the waiting room.
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
absolutely fantastic..this is so real-life..alas..


Vesna*
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
So true, Jerry. Well told! Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick
Nice, it happens way too often, doesn't it? Yesss...
Reviewed by autumn blair-strange
this really has a rhythm that would sound good set to music..i so enjoy your touching insights,and i'll keep on reading...tons-o-hugs,Autumn
Reviewed by A PAX
This could be set to music.......its universal.....unfortunately so many people could relate to this......(sadly)
well done.........you write very well.......i will be back.........pax A
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
This flows so well, Jerry. Thank you.
Reviewed by Digital Fairy
Jerry, thanks for reviewing my "Better days" poem. This is a great write, I can definitely relate... the irony of love...

Cheers!
Karissa
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
Such beauty and sadness in a connection of wisdom. Love may be lost but they can not take the memories from us that we wish to cling to. Wonderfully written!

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Debra Cizerle
Jerry, truly from the heart! Nice to meet you! Debby
Reviewed by Daniel
Hi Jerry,
Thought I'd make contact. I love the sentiment of holding that love in your heart. Who hasn't dreamt of a love past with such longing while realising the impossibility of the wish? My ideas of love aren't orthodox but I still appreciate the beauty of this poem. I hope to hear from you.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Jerry, "She was wounded when I found her,
Gave her love and made her whole,
Then her old love came and claimed her
And she left and took my soul.

In my dreams at night I hold her,
In my dreams she loves me still-
Yet I know I can't possess her
And I know I never will."
this is so moving and heartbreaking. speaking as one from experience... thank you for sharing, and so glad to meet you...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Susannah Carlson
Jerry, this is poinant and lovely. I generally don't go for rhyming poetry, but you pull this one off so smoothly. It communicates it's melancholy very truly. Nice nice work.
Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Beautiful saddness here, Jerry..You write passionately..Thanks for the kind review on my poem "In Blades Of Grass"..

Peace and harmony, Dove
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
I know this as well. I could feel the knife twisting when already in. This is .... oh! I wanted to cry for you. Fantastic bleeding of emotions!

Teresa
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Oh my..Thank you for telling me about this one, I do love it, dearly, oh just touches my heart so deeply,

Beautiful,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Christy French
Oh, wow. What a beautiful poem about lost love. This really touches the heart. Beautifully written, Jerry. Thanks for sharing it.
Reviewed by Button Mitchell (Reader)
Jerry,
I think i no how you feel.
Button
Reviewed by Helga Ross
You're right, Jerry! Thanks for recommending it. I enjoy and relate to this poem.
Helga
Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
Wow! I have lived this! A great write Jerry! Mal.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Very beautiful Jerry, bittersweet yet wrought with such a lovely touch. Sometimes the love we hold in our hearts is the safest kind to have. I love your work and shall be reading more..Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Oisín Breen
very well written indeed. I would like to see you attempt freeverse spontaneous sketching sometimes rhyme seems faecetious yet very very good don't get me wrong.
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Jerry, this really hit home with me.
Great pace here, nothing forced.
Good luck, from a brother whose been there...
-James
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Welcome to the den, Jerry. What a treat to read well-metered rhyme.. but my heart read it too and you speak of a longing and sadness that has gripped most. You say it well.. I do hope you overcome and go on. Its so tempting to stay with these feelings as poets.. but joy provides us with a muse as well.. Take care. katy.
Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)
Jerry,
We all have one that never leaves or thoughts hearts or dreams. The is a very very BEAUTIFUL Poem.
Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Longing deftly captured, hope bolted to the page. How sad, Jerry. Perhaps we cannot choose who we love-- perhaps it is love who chooses us. I summon a quote from Chekhov's About Love: '...and with a burning pain in my heart I realised how unnecessary, how petty, and how deceptive all that had hindered us from loving was.'
Reviewed by Patricia Boudreau (Reader)
Ah...welcome Jerry... and one of my favorites of yours, such a beautiful piece, one that I never tire of reading...
Reviewed by Linda Hill
OUTSTANDING, Jerry. A big welcome
to the den, and I will look forward
to more poems from you. You have an
excellent insight ... I could feel
your pain in your words.
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