|Reviewed by Theresa Hughes (Reader)
|This is the poem you told me today. Awesome to know someone can put life into words. You made my day. I sooo dread the time at the hospital. Thanks for being in the seat next to me in the waiting room.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|absolutely fantastic..this is so real-life..alas..
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|So true, Jerry. Well told! Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick
|Nice, it happens way too often, doesn't it? Yesss...|
|Reviewed by autumn blair-strange
|this really has a rhythm that would sound good set to music..i so enjoy your touching insights,and i'll keep on reading...tons-o-hugs,Autumn|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|This could be set to music.......its universal.....unfortunately so many people could relate to this......(sadly)
well done.........you write very well.......i will be back.........pax A
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|This flows so well, Jerry. Thank you.|
|Reviewed by Digital Fairy
|Jerry, thanks for reviewing my "Better days" poem. This is a great write, I can definitely relate... the irony of love...
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Such beauty and sadness in a connection of wisdom. Love may be lost but they can not take the memories from us that we wish to cling to. Wonderfully written!
|Reviewed by Debra Cizerle
|Jerry, truly from the heart! Nice to meet you! Debby|
|Reviewed by Daniel
Thought I'd make contact. I love the sentiment of holding that love in your heart. Who hasn't dreamt of a love past with such longing while realising the impossibility of the wish? My ideas of love aren't orthodox but I still appreciate the beauty of this poem. I hope to hear from you.
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Jerry, "She was wounded when I found her,
Gave her love and made her whole,
Then her old love came and claimed her
And she left and took my soul.
In my dreams at night I hold her,
In my dreams she loves me still-
Yet I know I can't possess her
And I know I never will."
this is so moving and heartbreaking. speaking as one from experience... thank you for sharing, and so glad to meet you...
|Reviewed by Susannah Carlson
|Jerry, this is poinant and lovely. I generally don't go for rhyming poetry, but you pull this one off so smoothly. It communicates it's melancholy very truly. Nice nice work.|
|Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
|Beautiful saddness here, Jerry..You write passionately..Thanks for the kind review on my poem "In Blades Of Grass"..
Peace and harmony, Dove
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|I know this as well. I could feel the knife twisting when already in. This is .... oh! I wanted to cry for you. Fantastic bleeding of emotions!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh my..Thank you for telling me about this one, I do love it, dearly, oh just touches my heart so deeply,
|Reviewed by Christy French
|Oh, wow. What a beautiful poem about lost love. This really touches the heart. Beautifully written, Jerry. Thanks for sharing it.|
|Reviewed by Button Mitchell (Reader)
I think i no how you feel.
|Reviewed by Helga Ross
|You're right, Jerry! Thanks for recommending it. I enjoy and relate to this poem.
|Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)
|Wow! I have lived this! A great write Jerry! Mal.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Very beautiful Jerry, bittersweet yet wrought with such a lovely touch. Sometimes the love we hold in our hearts is the safest kind to have. I love your work and shall be reading more..Ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Oisín Breen
|very well written indeed. I would like to see you attempt freeverse spontaneous sketching sometimes rhyme seems faecetious yet very very good don't get me wrong.|
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|Jerry, this really hit home with me.
Great pace here, nothing forced.
Good luck, from a brother whose been there...
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Welcome to the den, Jerry. What a treat to read well-metered rhyme.. but my heart read it too and you speak of a longing and sadness that has gripped most. You say it well.. I do hope you overcome and go on. Its so tempting to stay with these feelings as poets.. but joy provides us with a muse as well.. Take care. katy.|
|Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)
We all have one that never leaves or thoughts hearts or dreams. The is a very very BEAUTIFUL Poem.
|Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
|Longing deftly captured, hope bolted to the page. How sad, Jerry. Perhaps we cannot choose who we love-- perhaps it is love who chooses us. I summon a quote from Chekhov's About Love: '...and with a burning pain in my heart I realised how unnecessary, how petty, and how deceptive all that had hindered us from loving was.'|
|Reviewed by Patricia Boudreau (Reader)
|Ah...welcome Jerry... and one of my favorites of yours, such a beautiful piece, one that I never tire of reading...|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|OUTSTANDING, Jerry. A big welcome
to the den, and I will look forward
to more poems from you. You have an
excellent insight ... I could feel
your pain in your words.