Her Morning
by Ronald W. Hull
Thursday, November 28, 2002
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Her Morning
The morning light strikes my window,
Breaking through like an after rain bow,
And fills the room.
Pries my eyelids open,
Intrudes on my dream unspoken,
And casts away its gloom.
She is up, as usual,
With her cheery perusal,
Sweeping out with broom.
The cobwebs of a nighttime,
Spent in dreams without rhyme,
Music without tune.
Singing softly while she works,
Working out the kinks and quirks,
Of sleep ended way too soon.
Showering me with kisses,
All hits and no misses,
She pulls me to my seat.
Dresses me with passion,
All the rage and fashion,
That brings me to my feet.
Drops me in my chair with love,
A gentle tuck, a gentle shove.
Makes me feel so neat.
Makes me breakfast with a song,
Fills me up for all day long.
Black coffee oh so sweet.
Combs my hair, washes my face.
Hot shave back to human race.
Her fingers are a special treat.
Accompanying me to the door,
Blows me kisses as before.
Ending her no small feat.
I crank it up and drive away.
While she begins her other day.
Until, once again in evening, we meet.
Copyright 2002 © Ronald W. Hull
11/28/02
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| Reviewed by Amy Hawke |
5/31/2003 |
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your morning sounds blissful Ron...
one could only be so lucky at times
lovely write |
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| Reviewed by Victor Jensen |
12/19/2002 |
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| Life sure is much sweeter when it's spent around happy cheerful people and you are blessed to have such a caring person looking out for your needs, and pretty too. |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
12/4/2002 |
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| always appreciate....very good!!! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
12/4/2002 |
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| Morning sunshine :-) we all need someone like that in our lives. Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Tim Horton (Reader) |
11/28/2002 |
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Great write. I can feel this one.
Cheers,
Tim |
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| Reviewed by Bill Murray |
11/28/2002 |
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| She is priceless Ron!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/28/2002 |
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| Wonderful write...it's nice to appreciate the special people in our lives... |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
11/28/2002 |
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Wonderful poem I agree with Alex. love makes our world.
Good write. |
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| Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) |
11/28/2002 |
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| Great poem, Ron. Love makes our world much brighter. |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
11/28/2002 |
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| Outstanding flow and meter, Ron. Lovely woman. :) |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
11/28/2002 |
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She sounds like a wonderful person.
This is truly excellent Ron! Top marks for this poem. Ty, Dani :) |
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