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Eleven Twenty Seven
by Dee C.

Friday, November 29, 2002

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Eleven Twenty Seven

Endurance of immeasurable pain
Living as though dead
Exploitation of innocence’s
Victimized with cruelty
Endless days of hate
Never seeing a way out

Treacherous path of betrayal
Winding tales of deception
Erosion of once faithful trust
Naivety long ago lost
Trepidation a constant state
Yearning for some release

Spirits struggling for life
Engulfed in tragedy
Visceral acts to break free
Envisioning a better life
Not ever looking back.

ELEVEN TWENTY SEVEN
1127, 11/27, November 27
Four numbers dealt from
the devils deck of cards.

Dee ©2002/11/27

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Reviewed by John Bidwell 6/28/2003
Dee: This is absolutely awesome.
You have so much talent, and you are such a deep feeling person. Incredible poetry Dee.
Thanks for mentioning this.
John
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 11/30/2002
You have written a poem that is felt to the core.. utterly exposing this pain and by doing so, creating something of beauty.. I hope it helped to write this.. it is really good. katy.
Reviewed by Larry K 11/30/2002
The use of words to make one feel pain is so well done here Dee. Excellent
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/30/2002
beautifull write Dee.....
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 11/29/2002
Powerful, poignant and personal - a fine write.
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 11/29/2002
Emotions that touch us all and sometimes make us feel we should never have been born. Bill Murray
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/29/2002
Excellent creative write, much to ponder...
Reviewed by g g (Reader) 11/29/2002
Wonderfully written thank you(:
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 11/29/2002
An expunging of poison, wracking and reaving and rampaging, but then

Spirits struggling for life
Engulfed in tragedy
Visceral acts to break free
Envisioning a better life
Not ever looking back.

Not ever looking back...

Almost hurt to read this piece, Dee...
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 11/29/2002
A very intense and powerful write!
Reviewed by Linda Hill 11/29/2002
Amazing write Dee ~
You have captured the images
perfectly...beautiful!
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 11/29/2002
Excellent write, Dee.
Amor
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/29/2002
So painful to read, Dee. Well written as your work always is.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 11/29/2002
I turned fifty four on 11/27 so I know what you mean, except I glad God let me see it.
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