|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Dee: This is absolutely awesome.
You have so much talent, and you are such a deep feeling person. Incredible poetry Dee.
Thanks for mentioning this.
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|You have written a poem that is felt to the core.. utterly exposing this pain and by doing so, creating something of beauty.. I hope it helped to write this.. it is really good. katy.|
|Reviewed by Larry K
|The use of words to make one feel pain is so well done here Dee. Excellent|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|beautifull write Dee.....
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Powerful, poignant and personal - a fine write.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Emotions that touch us all and sometimes make us feel we should never have been born. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent creative write, much to ponder...|
|Reviewed by g g (Reader)
|Wonderfully written thank you(:|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|An expunging of poison, wracking and reaving and rampaging, but then
Spirits struggling for life
Engulfed in tragedy
Visceral acts to break free
Envisioning a better life
Not ever looking back.
Not ever looking back...
Almost hurt to read this piece, Dee...
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|A very intense and powerful write!|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Amazing write Dee ~
You have captured the images
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Excellent write, Dee.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|So painful to read, Dee. Well written as your work always is.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|I turned fifty four on 11/27 so I know what you mean, except I glad God let me see it.|