|Reviewed by Debbie Lacy
|Ooh! More steamy stuff here! Very explicit! I love it and thanks for sharing your sultry write Betsy! :)
|Reviewed by Masood Lohar
|Precisely human... fragile and slippery.... that is how we human are!.|
|Reviewed by Maddy van Deevers (Reader)
|I agree with the bossman, "penis" does sort of stand out (wink, wink), and I also like the way it falls apart at the end, the rythem and pattern become scattered and the thoughts disjointed...very appropriate.
Now for tipper et al...first of all, why is a woman into sex a whore??? nowhere in this poem is there any reference to money for sex. And why can't a whore be a poet, a whore was good enough for Jesus after all.
And if you don't like Betsy's writing....why do you read it???
|Reviewed by Frank Williams (Reader)
|Very hot poem!|
|Reviewed by satan165 aka bigbossman (Reader)
|good heat here, thats three stories where someone is 'tonging' your ass, never licking or eating. i like that though, nice description. the reference to charles' 'penis' doesnt seem to fit amongst the other uses of vernacular though, 'dick' or 'cock' would have worked better. and another story where the heat must have really hit the author as she was writing as the end of the piece loses its patterns and sensibility. thats not an insult!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|God! Just pick me up and shove me in!|
|Reviewed by Charles McKenzie (Reader)
|whatta fantasy, bring it fucking on|
|Reviewed by Kristin Barletta (Reader)
|I was wondering if you were still out there--now it looks like I'm in you...as well as Charles|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|love it... man, now i'm hot ;)~ brings back some fond memories...|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Your mouth needs a condom.|
|Reviewed by Eva T,
|man I did it again -11
|Reviewed by tipper dancer (Reader)
|Not here this is junk street trash..
This is not art....
|Reviewed by Not On This Borad Hun
|This is a poetry board, not a board for whores.
|Reviewed by Suzie Fowler (Reader)
|WOW! Sounds so fun. FINALLY some explicit writing in this place! I've been waiting for you!|