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A 3some
by Betsy

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Kristin, Betsy, and Charles makes the perfect threesome.
This is what would happen if they got together....

I sit on my bike, fingering myself. I need some loving tonight....
Kristin walks over, in a nice bikini, I slap her ass.
She turns to me and sticks her tongue in my mouth,we start kissing like crazy. My hand moves up and down her body, that's when Charles comes along.....
We take it inside, each of us naked.
Charles getting harder and harder,
As me and Kristin pick up where we left off....
Charles invites himself in and starts licking my pussy,
Kristin tounging my ass.
Charles has his fingers runnung on top of my breasts.
I go to Kristin's pussy and start slamming my tongue in.
Charles sticks his penis in me as I'm eating Kristin out.
We keep on like this.
How horny we all are.
God, I love this man.
And this woman.
Fuck me harder
Go, go go,
Until I hit orgasm.
man I'm hot.

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Reviewed by Debbie Lacy
Ooh! More steamy stuff here! Very explicit! I love it and thanks for sharing your sultry write Betsy! :)

Reviewed by Masood Lohar
Precisely human... fragile and slippery.... that is how we human are!.
Reviewed by Maddy van Deevers (Reader)
I agree with the bossman, "penis" does sort of stand out (wink, wink), and I also like the way it falls apart at the end, the rythem and pattern become scattered and the thoughts disjointed...very appropriate.
Now for tipper et al...first of all, why is a woman into sex a whore??? nowhere in this poem is there any reference to money for sex. And why can't a whore be a poet, a whore was good enough for Jesus after all.
And if you don't like Betsy's writing....why do you read it???
Reviewed by Frank Williams (Reader)
Very hot poem!
Reviewed by satan165 aka bigbossman (Reader)
good heat here, thats three stories where someone is 'tonging' your ass, never licking or eating. i like that though, nice description. the reference to charles' 'penis' doesnt seem to fit amongst the other uses of vernacular though, 'dick' or 'cock' would have worked better. and another story where the heat must have really hit the author as she was writing as the end of the piece loses its patterns and sensibility. thats not an insult!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
God! Just pick me up and shove me in!
Reviewed by Charles McKenzie (Reader)
whatta fantasy, bring it fucking on
Reviewed by Kristin Barletta (Reader)
I was wondering if you were still out there--now it looks like I'm in well as Charles
Reviewed by jude forese
love it... man, now i'm hot ;)~ brings back some fond memories...
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Your mouth needs a condom.
Reviewed by Eva T,
man I did it again -11
no good.
Reviewed by tipper dancer (Reader)
Not here this is junk street trash..
This is not art....
Reviewed by Not On This Borad Hun
This is a poetry board, not a board for whores.
Reviewed by Suzie Fowler (Reader)
WOW! Sounds so fun. FINALLY some explicit writing in this place! I've been waiting for you!

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