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She's so...
by Bourge

Monday, December 02, 2002

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She's so beautiful,
the girl I always wanted to be
the one who always runs
a step or two ahead of me.

She knows everything,
there's nothing she can't understand,
just knowing who she is
stops me caring who I am.

She's so there,
she's seen the world and knows the score,
everything I do I find
she's done a thousand times before.

She's set apart,
from everyone who blends into a hazy crowd,
she wakens up the deadened hearts
and silences the loud.

It's like I said,

She's so beautiful,
there's something about her and I can't compare,
I want to be in her world,
just to see what it's like up there.

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Reviewed by Claire Shaw (Reader) 12/5/2002
is she anyone i know? Is another silver velvet raindrop moondew magical poem
Reviewed by Jamez Michael (Reader) 12/3/2002
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 12/2/2002
But does she write the lovely poems that you do?
Reviewed by Sally Montoye (Reader) 12/2/2002
I love this!!! Great job!
Reviewed by a- maryllis 12/2/2002
"she wakes up the deadened hearts
and silences the loud"

Beautiful lines Charlotte... nice "work"! :)
Reviewed by sophie merrick (Reader) 12/2/2002
the rymes sit well-no awkward links, to explain a beautiful girl. She must be special for you to write this about her.
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