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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
3/11/2003 |
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This one speaks to the senses.
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/26/2003 |
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But it is like me to lie to myself....
You missing out my friend....imagination can be quite fullfilling.....
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
12/11/2002 |
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Very interesting to take a peek into you this way.
Love, Janet xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader) |
12/5/2002 |
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| This is a beautiful piece of writing; romantic without being soppy it explores the emotion of desire and longing extremely well. I particularly like the butterfly image of the first stanza and the way the first three stanza's take the reader from day to night then dawn, a cycle of longing.. I look forward to reading more of the same. Great work Ron. Mal. |
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| Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader) |
12/4/2002 |
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| so, even in weakness you remain...eloquent...nice inside view to your depth, fierce poet...**Mari** |
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| Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader) |
12/4/2002 |
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| A write that speaks to my heart... beautifully written, Ron... |
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| Reviewed by Sally Montoye |
12/4/2002 |
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| Excellent write!! |
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| Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll |
12/3/2002 |
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| Nice write Ron |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
12/3/2002 |
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If her touch were as light and pure as these words…indeed you would be blessed.
Such beautiful writing. I love reading your work..it always makes me feel good inside. Ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by jing javier |
12/3/2002 |
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wanting someone so much makes us experience weird things.. to the point that we do things not normal for us.
very good! |
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