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No More ***Warning strong language***
by Marilyn Seray
Wednesday, December 04, 2002

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My insides are raging
I want to scream bloody
Murder over your bloody
Body. Yes, I did it, and I
Donít give a shit who knows
Itís nothing compared
To the many times my heart
And soul was subjected to
Your jackhammer torture.
All the cheating and lying
From your fraudulent
Mouth. You are Satanís
Pitchfork; burning and
Stabbing at me, scarring me.
Flaunting your seedy-ass
Women in front of me. No,
No decency from you Ė
Not an ounce; no remorse,
No respect do I get. Well,
No more, you have stabbed
And burned me one time
Too many. So forget your
Insincere apologies. Get up
Off you knees, and stop
Begging like the dog you
Are. Stab your own self
And when you withdraw, the
Pitchfork you will NOT find
blood - youíll find the tines gone.

(C) MS 2002

NOTE: Purely fiction. I just thought I'd try something a little different

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Reviewed by jude forese 12/4/2002
sharp, very sharp...
Reviewed by The Voice (Reader) 12/4/2002
Very powerful write. This is definately different for you, but it is great.

The Voice
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 12/4/2002
WoW! This is different for you
Powerful work in this one...
Hope they all read the (purely fiction part)
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 12/4/2002
Pheww!!! glad i read the note at the bottom
I was ready to start running LOL
Reviewed by 12/4/2002
Great write and very different. Good job Mele.
Love and Aloha, Mundo
Reviewed by 12/4/2002
Whoa sweets! I've been trying to comment for the longest time and it finally let me! What a strong write! Love your expanding creativity here! Glad it's all fiction... Talk to you later.... hugs
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 12/4/2002
Well, you KNOW that I like it. ;) Just my cup-o-tea. Really, it's great. Watch out! hee hee

Love, Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 12/4/2002
Excellent...let you hair down! ;) A strong write here...Ty, Dani
Reviewed by Lori Moore 12/4/2002
Strong images.... great job!
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 12/4/2002
Oh My! I would'nt want to be in the line of fire of this message. Good write Marilyn.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 12/4/2002
Man, this one is violent, I hope this isn't real, it sure seems too real. Good write.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 12/4/2002
yipe. i hope things get better...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. (the tines gone...ewwwwwww!)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/4/2002
rant on, baby gurl! whoa, i hope i NEVER get on YOUR bad side!! good ranting here, marilyn! thanks for sharing! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 12/4/2002
HOT DOG!!!! my kinda write. you tell em marilyn dirty rotten scoundrel. great job, love the tine part
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