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| Reviewed by Button Mitchell |
4/17/2003 |
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WWOOOOW i love this one too.
Button Mitchell
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/15/2003 |
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Oh That was so lovely, just wonderful!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Monika Arnett |
2/10/2003 |
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I love to dance.... Thanks for the music.
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| Reviewed by Graham whittaker |
2/9/2003 |
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| The sentiment is beautiful.. Perhaps with an extra 'hook' this is a song rather than a simple poem.. It has cadences that will fit rather well with an acoustic backing. There is room too for some interesting expansion.. I love it! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
2/8/2003 |
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| A beautiful picture..And a stunning poem...Is the dance ever really over in your heart tho..Ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Oisín Breen |
1/12/2003 |
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| Lovely. You can't outrun the rain that is true but if you set your mind intent on the things occouring it no longer proves relevant |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Boudreau |
12/14/2002 |
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Oh I do like this one..."can't outglow the moon"...
Bravo Jerry...
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
12/12/2002 |
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| wow.. you have a real talent for JUST SAYING IT! no frills.. good, honest writing. katy. |
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| Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader) |
12/12/2002 |
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This is a wonderful write. certianly did make me think.
Glenna |
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