Who am I?
by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥
Sunday, December 08, 2002
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Many a teen feel lost in the crunch,
Trying to be different from the crowd,
Trying to seperate themselves from the bunch.
Even if it means wearing an outfit that's loud.
Well the question lies in who then, am I?
Does anyone really know who exactly they are?
Or being mundane do they wish to deny?
Defining people as cool by their type of car.
One thing I do know,
Is parts of who I am,
And some of the qualities I show,
In this poem I am gonna cram..
I am an artist, a poet, and an athelete too,
A huntress, a daughter, and also a friend,
A runner and even the paddler of a canoe.
A singer, a dancer; the list never ends...
All you have to do,
To seperate yourself from the crowd,
Is to yourself be strong and true ,
And of your accomplishments be proud.
So who are you?
Define youself as an individual,
That's my challenge for you to do,
The list is perpetual.
Come on! Who are you? :)
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|Reviewed by Kacie Rahm
|this is good, have you ever read i love or this is me? they're both by me, but they seem like you'd like them.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|you are young, but your poem speaks volumes on who you are! well done, kari! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)|
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|too funny that we did the same challenge! great minds!!! please to meet you kari, and you can ramble Anytime at my den ha
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|So wonderful for one so young, but you may find as the years pass, you are constantly uncovering more of you and are less confident of knowing yourself so well. Enjoyed this very much.|
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci
|You seem to know yourself quite well
some people spend a life time and still don't know who they are
Bravo Greate write
|Reviewed by Who I wanna be.
|Pretty slick Kari. (This is the real angus).|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|Bravo! Well said!|
|Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader)
|You are a poet... that's all you need to be sometimes.|
|Reviewed by Angus
|Angus is befuddled. I've forgotten who he is. WHO IS ANGUS!!?? Ock, this lass has put me back a few years...|