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Where is My Place in Life?
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
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Where is my place in life?
It seems to shift,
it doesn't want me.
Where is my passion in life?
Short-lived spurts come
and go, leaving me
Where are my dreams of life?
Blanketed by smothering
peeking out to
Where is my stability of mind?
Ebbing and flowing,
I am the jury,
the judge, the
the wayward warden.
Where is my place in life?
From the depths of depression's empty agony...
And an interesting view from Zan...
ZUBAIRI ATAMVAKU NASSEEM
Member # 668
posted 08-21-2002 04:30 AM
As an individual human person you definitely have your place. But its realisation requires that sociality permeates us more than it is presently the case. In fact the historical social pendulum need to swing more to the centre. Presently, individuality has preponderated over social cohesion, thus heightening the sense of loss for the individual human person. It is partly for this reason that those of us living in predominantly rural societies wonder the wisdom of our governments to madly cry for industrialisation, notwithstanding the modern economic imperatives.
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|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|I think a lot of people will relate to this Erin, the world we have made becomes increasingly materialistic and impersonal and so many people feel disconnected. I guess its worse in the US but Britain is becoming a pressure cooker society too. I found a way out - I wouldn't recommend it to anybody else - so there must be a chance for everybody to get off the treadmill|
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|I don't know what to say, Erin...I feel as if you have written of me
and just, I...powerful piece, my friend, to me it cries out what...I cannot explain, but, beautifully done exploration of what/why ...unque, each...yet so many, well, don't know...suffer and try...I ...just Thank You...((((erin))))
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|your place in life is where you make it
and right now your place is here
creating thought provoking write such as this
Then again it could be in an all day health spa being spoiled
|Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
|if you ask me, I'd say you are just a well-placed guardian spirit, being where you are most needed at any given time.|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|In depression we are judge, jury and executioner of ourselves. Well thought out. Well written.|
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Wonderful Question ... Where is my place in life ? ... When u ask this ... Did u ever try to understand what others think of u .. Well if u ask me where is ur place in Life .. I shall tell u .. U are living in others heart ... Those who think of u .. those who care u .. Those who move with u .. U live in their heart ... Wish u all happiness and all success in life ...
Keep smiling and take care ...
|Reviewed by Angelica Young
|Thats is a question i ask myself as well, Great poem. I relly enjoyed it.
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
|captured the irreverence of wonderment
i like it
|Reviewed by William M. Sowman
|I am not trying to be silly Erin ... but to
me ... your place in life ... is exactly
where you are at this moment ... THIS IS ERIN NOW!! It will change as you change ... emotionally, physically, mentally, materially. Example ... my writing songs is an attempt to change my place in life. Success commercially will change my place in
life. (Monetarily, environmentally, etc.) New home, new car, new environment. And my daily selections will also change, different place, different people, different problems. OR I WILL STAY EXACTLY AS I AM IN TIME AND SPACE ... WRITING AND WRITING AND DOING THE SAME THINGS EVERYDAY TILL I DIE. So will my attempts to change my life through what I do on a day to day basis shift me to a different place in time and space, or shall I always be in one stationary place in life????? Bill Murray
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|legitimate questions...answers found deep within your psyche;-)|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Where are you at in life? Between the A and the T. That is what my mother used to tell me.|