|Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
|Love truly is an oasis in this desert of life. I like the idea of "cool water eyes" being able to quench her longing. What an image that evokes. Too bad I'm not a painter... only with words, and you've done a fabulous job with them yourself! :)|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Absolutely Beautiful! Wonderful write!|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|A beautiful blend of imagery and verse. Astounding piece of work, Melissa.
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|I loved every line I read Melissa, great poem, great new photo. Floria|
|Reviewed by JimmyHolder ShyPoet1
|Excellent - really loved that opening stanza - its very good as is the whole thing.
There are secrets that haunt
in the back of her mind,
circling like falcons in the vast desert sky.
So oblivious is he
to the thoughts that churn
behind her eyes.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione
|This one is well written, I thought I would come by to see what you were writing these days. I had done a few chilling short stories -- noticed that some of them have the coarse language warning to them :lol:|
|Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader)
|I love the way you structured this poem. It's very well-written and the words make it come to life. Much enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|This was quite an exceptional piece!!!
PS: GREAT PROFILE PHOTOGRAPH!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Every line is meaningful and exciting...you are awesome lady;-)!|
|Reviewed by J John (Reader)
|Excellant write ... best i have seen for a while .... j|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Sooooo romantic Melissa! start to finish|
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Really Great ...|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|"Cool water eyes that quench her longing
call to her." Marvellous poem! Wow! You get better and better. You need to start thinking about publication of your work. If
you ever have a poem tht you think can be a song ... let's give it another try. You have such wonderul talent. Bill Murray
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|You paint a beautiful picture.