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Crimson Rose
by Sherry L Gibson

Tuesday, December 10, 2002

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Crimson Rose

Today I plucked a bright crimson rose
Still wet with dripping dew
Shimmering petals in the sun light
Reminding me of you


Elegant, soft, moist, crimson petals
Picked only at their best
Succulent fragrance filling the air
Held close against my breast.


The luxurious crimson rose I hold
Petals formed so flawless
Blanket my heart in soft red velvet
Memories of your caress


Succulent satin crimson petals
Fall gently to the floor
Floating down from the dying flower
Like a love that is no more.



 

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Reviewed by Jim Dunlap 1/15/2004
Nice job, but you made a mistake here:

Elegant, soft, moist, crimson petals
Picked only at it's best

"it's" would be its anyway, but petals is plural, so it has to be their.

All in all, very nice.
Reviewed by Eddie Thompson 10/9/2003
I loved the poem Crimson Rose. You truly have a gift!
Reviewed by Victoria Noxon 9/30/2003
Absolutely beautiful write. Loved your picture also. Thank you for sharing.
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 9/13/2003
I loved how you repeated the color crimson and the word rose over and over again -- like a repeating theme. This repeating theme kept appealing to the reader, keeping them engaged in your poem. Truly lovely poignant poem about the simple pleasures of life.
Reviewed by Londis Carpenter 5/16/2003
After reading your review of the poems posted on my website, I just had to go check yours out. I love this one. I also read Grandpa's tales. I will be reading the others in time. I find the rose is a wonderful subject for metaphor and simile, having used it in severalpoems. Your handling of it in this poem is relevant and superb.
Reviewed by Michelle Myers 4/18/2003
I love the poem. It is very touching.
Reviewed by Renee Bagley 12/25/2002
Sherry this poem is so beautifully written. Lovely images:)

Renee Bagley
Reviewed by Shar Phoenix 12/23/2002
Beautiful and touching, soft and vibrant at once.
You're nuturing your spirit and it shows.
Thanks muchly.
shar

Reviewed by Billie 12/17/2002
Omg.....you really should have used that pic I sent you of my Mr. Lincoln in my garden. Great read!!
Reviewed by William Gibson (Reader) 12/14/2002
Good job. Very descriptive.
Reviewed by Rhonda 12/11/2002
A very beautiful poem, Sherry. I really enjoyed it alot.
Reviewed by Sharon Sanders (Reader) 12/11/2002
Excellent poem, Sherry! Filled with emotion of love and loss. Enjoyed it so much!
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 12/10/2002
You have separated a rose from its roots and it died...it served its purpose well. Love need not die if it has its roots firmly planted in the ground and is given freely. Beautiful images, Sherry.
Amor
Reviewed by wanda 12/10/2002
sweet and touching very nice.
Reviewed by Madame X (Reader) 12/10/2002
Comfortable and flowing. Very lovely write.
Reviewed by Angelica Young 12/10/2002
That is so sentimental and touching. I really enjoyed it. Short and sweet. But very sad
Love Angie
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