|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Hmmmmmmmmm! I think I'd like to disappear too,
in a gay bar.
Bye for now,
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|Oh the free trips I could take.
I really enjoyed this one
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|HA HA HA! What a brilliant humourous writer! This is great. Teresa|
|Reviewed by Amber Lynn
|You crack me up. I am tempted to ask what made you think, but, no. I don't think I will.|
|Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni
|Your boring day is our gain.|
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|Clever rhyme...wouldn't it be neat if we could all do this at will! Like a controlled OBE! Keep writing boingy stuff like this one!!|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|LOL I love your poetry.....You seem to have the BEST sense of humour. Enjoyed this....but wahhhh that pic is scary :| Ty, Dani ;)|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Ian asked me to pop over and I am glad that I did. I very much enjoyed this.
|Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
|A fine write, I enjoyed it greatly. My only constructive comment would be to revise somewhat after "evil" as it seems to lose it's authenticity, by default of over- poeticisms. These are my humble thoughts, in any case.|
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Good Write ... Keep it up|
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Oh thank you Marigold, this is wonderful|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Boingy indeed, but it produced some great humor!!|
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
|This was fun, and I am with everyone, I really wish I knew a way to disappear sometimes! Oh the things we could all do, if we really could become invisble! Though I think I would get my self in trouble! lmao!
Thank for the smile!
|Reviewed by William M. Sowman
|Jist think of all the other things you can do now as invisible. Wow, give me that. Make me invisible and I will be a holy terror. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Dee C.
|This is wonderful! Oh...to be invisible for a day...what would we all do?....lol
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very nice... enjoyed... nothing like a little embarrassment to make one's day...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is very creative, I love the flow and rhyme...great write!|
|Reviewed by Phillip Carpenter
|Great imagery, reminds me of the old "little man upon the stair but when I looked he wasn't there" or something like that.|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Sounds a lot like a dream of anonymity. There are a lot of things one can do while invisible and this is a funny yet revengeful way of getting a little payback. Great write, Calendula.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I wish i could disappear....but then that special person won't find me.......lol
Nice write ....what happend to the teacher??? was he band.....