by Daniel L Kramer
Sunday, December 15, 2002
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It all started as a crazy haze
I looked at everything with a paranoind gaze
It took over my life without me knowing
Before I knew it the addiction was growing
The self torture of curiosity, had taken my mind my mind
To a place inside of me, I had been trying to find
It had killed my brains, as it filled my lungs
The feeling had taken over, the addiction had won
It had taken my freinds it had taken my wealth
This self inflicteded habit has taken my health
I then heard a voice, coming from within
It said what I was doing, was more than a sin
As I watched my life, flash before my eyes
I relalized addiction ,was the devil in disguise
The manifestation of frivolus thought
The preamble of death was more than a shock
The doward spiral of addiction is gone
With nothing left I will try to hang on
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|Reviewed by Anastacia Lee
|I know exactly what you mean, as i have been here many of times. Great write! Kinda reminds me a bit of my poem titled "HeRoiN.
|Reviewed by Suzie Fowler
|I know exactally what you mean.....Hey, you don;t work at bk do you????? Are you lying in your cantact info????|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|anything that controls us, limits our abilities... very well done!|
|Reviewed by a- maryllis
|This is cool, I love the closing lines... very good Daniel :)|