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| Reviewed by Glen Lovelace |
4/13/2004 |
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Oft' recurring moods,
return to me our childhood:
"once upon a time"
when memories are simple,
definitions intrinsic!
GDL (I-MAGE)
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
12/29/2002 |
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John,
I have never tried this form, but I agree with Peggy...you did it with ease!
Very Good!
Hugs and Happy New Year,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Nancy |
12/29/2002 |
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Left me with a beautiful image.
Many warm hugs
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
12/29/2002 |
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Good one!!!!!
~ Sandie and Buddy ~ |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
12/29/2002 |
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| Tanka you John for this little shortie. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
12/29/2002 |
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| Don't know what a 'tanka' is, but then, I'm just a country poet. Somebody's idea of elegance, I guess. Does it communicate? |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/29/2002 |
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| i'm still learning the different forms poetry takes...if this is a first attempt, it's an outstanding one! great tanka, john! happy new year, (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
12/29/2002 |
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First Time at Tanka?
this great, beautiful, I have yet to try Tanka, I've written Haiku and Tetractys, looking foward to my first Tanka.
William |
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