|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so very moving. I could relate to the mood of the poem so well.
|Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
|One can get stuck on negative aspects of life. After a while maybe one doesn't know what to do with happiness. But happiness always knows what to do with a sad person. This is the essence of grace.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|This one hurts and I guess somedays we all feel that way. Very well written, Jing.|
|Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Hopefully those who feel this way will cross paths with you one day soon and find happiness through your friendship. Have a great day.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Jing you speak deep truth with a short poem.
Yes I too feel this way sometimes. But not all the time. There has to be hope somewhere in your heart and mine. Bill Murray
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Brief and to the point...we have all felt that at one time or another...but the best part is tomorrow...it will always come to show us a path. Excellent work as always, Jing.
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Have certainly experienced this darkness, too. Don't think many are immune to these kind of feelings at times. Excellent write, vivid expression...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|that is the time when you take the bull by the horns and cut off his balls;-)couldn't resist;-)!I do know what you mean...|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|It's a state of mind, of course stuff happens to make us unhappy for awhile, but we have to hold our heads up, smile, be positive, because life does go on.|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
People Fear Themselves More than Anything Else,The Handling Of That Fear Is Essential If They (You) Are To Make Any Progress Toward Personal Happiness or Fulfillment!
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|I think I would succumb to desolation if my life felt this way, jing...strong write with few words.