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A Mind's Thought (Limbotic Dreams/Limbotic Visions)
by Avatar 319

Saturday, January 04, 2003

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Trapped in a moment,
A moment of a thought.
The thought of a memory.

It fades in & out or comes & goes, whether clear or unclear, it is of memory, a picture or scene.
It plays, over & over at times.

Motionless, I be, still I can see that u are not, as if in haste, a blur past me. Then, I fade into another thought.

Looking at me, starring at u, as if we were making love & something wrong was said, such a cold stare. That look as if u were wondering of me or even plotting.

Unclear, I awake 2 u, your eyes closed, I think, what a fucked up dream, what a fucked up vision. I sigh, close my eyes & it begins again.

Motionless, I be, only 2 think & I see,
Of memory, a picture or scene, a memory of thought,
the thought of a moment.

A moment I'm trapped in, as if, frozen in this dreamstate, until it completes.

It plays over & times adding, but, only when I close my eyes, then.. it begins again.

Re-occurring visions of dreams, suggest that the mind is trying 2 show what has been forgotten or what is about 2 happen.

-Solution #9

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Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 2/27/2003
I've missed ya! It seems like forever. I hope that you're OK.

Love, JC xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by lashon ISHMON 2/10/2003
hay baby!! this is a great poem as usual but it has been a long time so email me
Reviewed by jude forese 1/5/2003
a truly suspended state of perception...
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 1/4/2003
If you are in limbo...then what can you do?
Things keep recurring in your world? And you "space it?" Almost like you are on an unseen journey. So long as you know your
destination, everything is fine I guess?
Bill Murray
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