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after the trip...... by richard poor Sunday, January 05, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan i held my breath waiting,hoping that the night's offering was more real than dream... you know when you meet that feeling of complete and she was magnetized i could see it shining there in her eyes that saw the heart and soul the all of me i could show and she said maybe on a wild night maybe she would take me up and it did not matter that she was and i was we only saw what we wanted.
....the fall.

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	1/6/2003

Beautifully done. !E




Reviewed by na na (Reader)	1/6/2003

A mystical offering that moves a lot. Bill Murray




Reviewed by Micha Julian	1/5/2003

yes, agree w/Lori...oh, 'more real than dream' to have that...oh! & the 'magnetized'...'i could see it in her eyes'/yes, these moments can turn into...oh...'maybe'? (very female, at times...) but one can feel the pull here and is drawn into the sensual/soulful connection...ah...but...the fall? after the trip...oh, damn... what an arousing of hopes/heart/sensuality...and...what a palpable feeling...yes, oh...makes one recall...captured a moment's meaning, much meaning ...what a pull into this 'trip' ah, lucky girl...if the maybe turns into...more! perfect, richard...so there, so human and wow!




Reviewed by Lori Moore	1/5/2003

An offering maore real than a dream... great line. Nice one!




Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)	1/5/2003

So good!!!