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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/15/2003 |
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did you know why sea water is salty....its because I have been crying there once to often...I love your write
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
1/12/2003 |
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| Oh this was so romantic and sad. Reminds me of Moonlight Sonata |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/12/2003 |
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| Great poem and so sad. |
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| Reviewed by Victor Jensen |
1/12/2003 |
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| Nothing in life is harder to face than being seperated from someone you truly love. This is a good poem! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/12/2003 |
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| Jack...so very expressive and beautifully crafted, love the title and last line too;-) |
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| Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook |
1/12/2003 |
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| Wonderful, Jack! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
1/12/2003 |
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| Ahhhhh Jack....this has a touch of the old Masters...fantastic...ty my partner in rhyme....Dani ;) |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
1/12/2003 |
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Gee Jack... This is so romantic!!! Such a beautiful write.. well written I love it!!!
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
1/12/2003 |
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| Jack, such a beautiful write,,so many hearts lonely and can only be loved by that special one,,Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
1/12/2003 |
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Wow...AWESOME!!!
No other words to describe
this.
< tears > |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
1/12/2003 |
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Jack,
lonely and beautiful write.
with excellent imagery
Loved the last line.
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Thelma Shutters |
1/12/2003 |
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| There really must be thousands of young men and women today feeling like this. This was beautiful.Thelma |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
1/12/2003 |
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| Wow! ....touching and simplistically beautiful, Jack! |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
1/12/2003 |
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This is sad and so true . Throughout history we all have heard or read the sadness of lovers who lost someone in this respect. you captured the yearning and heartache. great poem.
--Susan |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
1/12/2003 |
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| What a lovely, aching story, Jack. You do have the heart of a poet! The last 2 lines were especially sweet, bringing the story together. katy. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
1/12/2003 |
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lovely, romantic and sad,
excellent write
William |
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